I absolutely love this story. I have read it three times already. This was the first fanfiction I have ever read, and it inspired me to read more, and eventually I joined the world of fanfiction writing. I just wanted to say that I love your story, and I wanted to say that a sequel would be loved. :) Also, I read Insomnia, and loved that one too. My cat is asleep on my hand, which makes it hard to type, so I'm gonna go now. Great job.

WV

Can't wait for the sequel! I'm about to read Art of Insomnia and I just wanted to say well done and great job! Would you email me when the sequel is finished? Please?



Can't wait to hear more!

Ah! I loved it! Holy marathon, Batman!

Cripes, I just freakin LOVE your Vifa's!! :] They are absolutely freakin amazing! Keep writing! I won't hold it against ya! :D

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323

I Just finished reading your story and I thought it was great. I really liked the part when Tifa got tired of both Cloud and Barret btakeing her for granted.

HJ

your description is really amazing, and the words you use are beyond me. i had to check the meaning of some words once in a while ahha, but it's good caz i'm learning. ^^ anyways, it was a good short story. i enjoyed reading it. =)

ahh..the decision to make. ^^

so many questions >.

yay, looking good. =)

i love ur description..it's so..descriptive! ha~ ^_^

Wow, I would never have thought this pairing to work out (I can't really imagine Vincent with anyone). But you really make it work while kepping them in character.
It's so nice to read something that describes emotions so well that you feel them too. I truly love your writing. I know this will sound corny, but reading your work inspires me to write my own. I love reading through your stories. It feels as if I'm right there in the story because it is so descriptive. All the senses are engaged just by reading the story.

I can't really think of criticism because I did not find mistakes.
There's nothing else to say except thank you for posting your work here :)

~Undeniable Mystique~

Wow, an update. I

Aww. The ending was cute and simple. I like that. Thanks for the update!

Hiyaz, me again going on a ficcy spree of your stories. Aww Tifa got him the same painting? That's so sweet and the little symbols were a nice touch. I really hope he travels to Edge to see her, hopefully in the night to free her from Cloud and Seventh Heaven's grasp. Haha. I'm loving this pairing. Plz write more when you can. Although your chaps are short at times, they're beautiful and enticing to the reader. ^^

OMG I love this! Your words are just beautiful and so poetic. The way you describe simple things such as their smiles or the tones of their voices makes everything magical and lush. I love the way you describe things and you only make me want to strive more to become a better writer and reach such a level. Vincent is just so deep and secretively sweet and endearing. I love the way you've written about him and I really hope him and Tifa work out. Damn hawt man. ^^

Oh another new pairing for me to get attached to. I've never thought of these two. Vincent is hawt ::drools:: I love him. I'm surprised he was so touchy with her in this first chap. he always came off as the dark distant character, the man of few words as you put it and now he's placing kisses on Tifa's forehead. That was fast. Still - I think it's sweet. Can't wait to read on. ^^