hm, good lemony sequel. must read next.

Wow! This was really good. I feel really bad for hinata for waiting for the guy that she loves (or has lust for) for a year. Thaat must really suck! You should write the other 2 parts to it. You're a good writer. (GAARA LEMON IS AWSOME!)

Hmm I wonder if he haved some practice with this activity with another girl?!

omg!! yhu are so good! i ♥ yhu!

siks

loved it wow he got good at what he was doing over the year

That is so unfair of Gaara! Imagine leaving her evertime they do 'it'!

Nice!

That was very good very good indeed could you plz add another part to it because i believe it could be even better if there was another part to it.
Melissa
ps.reply back soon

wow... weird... O.o i liked it tho ^^ i like "weird" very much XDXD

C'mon I wanna know how Gaara thinks and feels. Oh, and geez after all this sex, you think Hinata will get pregnant. Did you even mention Gaara wearing a condom?

I like this one!! I like the prvious one too!

Man! one year! this was
just as good as the first
one

wow that was alot better than 1 day. u r a GENIUS!

okay... dats mean tho always leaving her... tsk tsk bad gaara!