Another beautiful written story. Your strength is very much in the carefully considered language you use. I know you said that you didn't have a beta for this one, but I didn't notice-- your grammar/spelling was very good. And your characterization, especially that of Yuuko, was simply exquisite.

Ooh, eerie, with great characterization... I can't wait to read more. Not many people write about Clow, and you have done it well. The last line kills me, but the whole of it is great.

Nice story. very nice!

aw, so pretty X( and since i felt down today, i cried cause i like him. i think i'm the first reviewer :D.