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Asugar
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseGreat job. Perfectly captured the contradictions of Sheppard.
La Madrugada
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseYay, another great Pre-Atlantis John story! Loved lines like 'Sheppard both failed to live up to his reputation and surpassed it spectacularly'. Classic!
Wolf Maid
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, absolutely love this fic. I think you pretty much nailed the ideas of the other soldiers, and I loved the couple of lines Sheppard has--v. in character. Wonderful fic!
emma
2007-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseLove it hope for more!
hidhere
2007-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseAmusing title for a fantastic fic. Enjoyed it immensely. Great humor and insight into the military mind...loved the reference to Sheppard's lax attitude not even being acceptable for the Air Force...as ex-Air Force I chuckled out loud over that one. Well done...very well done. I hope that you will continue writing more stories soon. Thank you.
deleted and inactive
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseNice. I never considered the effect Sheppard's rather sudden inclusion might have on the people who had fought their way in.
You're freaky insightful, you know that? :D

kay x
emergencyfan
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseOMG, ROLLING!

Stackhouse, who also had the gene, would tell anyone who'd listen how he'd been turning women on by touching them for years and that had never gotten him anywhere good before this. Markham would always reply that that was because Stackhouse's women were all inflatable.
GG Superhero of the future
2006-05-30
ch 1,
abuseI so loved this. Great to see their opinions of Sheppard and really they are well founded, even though we all love the guy, you can see what they are getting at. Loved Stackhouse's comment and Markham's theory of the women being inflatable, it made me laugh out loud. I loved it the way all it took was one look at him decked up and it threw all their theories out the window. Brill :)
blingy
2006-05-16
ch 1,
abuseYour story made me finally register so I could say: Wow! Very fun read. Spot on with the voices of men, and it's always nice to see another point of view regarding the hero.
ESCotLoE
2006-05-15
ch 1,
abusewow that was great!
i love those little "before atlantis" stories that give a little bit of history on sheppard.

id love to see another discussion or story after they get to atlantis or when the daedelus comes and brings new recruits.

keep up the good work
Krows Scared
2006-05-15
ch 1,
abuseExcellent little piece, is this the end or is there more? a second chapter could be the flip side and do Shep's POV

Just the right amount of sneering and jeering from the troops and Sumner's 'by the book' style.
Alipeeps
2006-05-14
ch 1,
abuseThat was excellent! What a wonderful idea for a fic - I've never seen anyone touch on that subject before and you imagined it beautifully. I love the humour in this piece (Stackhouse's comments about turning on women - class!) and the very believable glimpse into Sheppard's behaviour and the perceptions of the other military members of the team. And a lovely ending. Brilliant. Thank you!
Sniperbob
2006-05-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease carry on with this story, please. It's a great. It would be really interesting to see this go further, to see how they would react when he gets to be in charge.
Mackenise Jackson
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseOh I like that. It was really good. I like how you had the whole airforce/marine thing going on. Very well written- very good.
Sarie Venea
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseWow. I really loved this. If we don't see Sheppard in dress blues sometime VERY soon I may go a touch crazy. So good, keep writing!
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