Actually didn't think much of LavixMiranda until that ep on the ship when miranda tried to stop Lavi out of the boat.
XD Great Idea~ xD

aha I've been looking for a Miranda fic XD and I must say I love the way you kept everyone in character and still pulled off a great one-shot, excellent work. I very much enjoyed it

-Your favorite dancing pickle

Despite not being a fan of the couple, you did a really good job. Thank you!

Heheh, once again, you have a way with words that's extremely intriguing. Plus the fact that you wrote this. Thanks!

i LOVE this story - it's total genius! the characters are not at all off and the situation has only been adjusted slightly from its original content - all giving it a realistic feel. you've expressed their feelings and thoughts in an empathatic manner and the writing style is mature and detailed. I'm an enormous fan of Lavi/RabiXMiranda so I hope you will write more. Best wishes!

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

This is the sweetest D. Gray Man story I've ever read- I love Lavi and he was so CUTE here! Great job!

well, I do like this pairing, A LOT, you got this great, but, you should have put more love on the fic XD
but it is ** great

write more!! XD!

Very cute story. I wouldn't have thought of LavixMiranda as a pairing, but you make it work. Good job!

Hello... My name is Mask Shane and this fanfic was read /filed a time ago. Rabi and Miranda are so nice , they like me very much. I did not think that they could be pairing, but that possibility made me smile. I read in English because all fandoms in that lenguage usually are brilliant and when I look something that I like so much, like your fanfic, I ask for the author, his/her permission to make a translation to my original language: Spanish. You would grant the pleasure to me to make a translation? I hope you say yes. With affection and respect, I take leave. ñ_ñ

RabixMiranda!
I really love this pairing and this is the first, I reapeat the FIRST fanfic I read/found about them! Thank you very much for writing this!

Do you have a livejournal? There's a RabixMiranda community!! Join and write more there *evil* xD Just kidding, thank you, and cute fic!! I like this kind of fanfic, because it makes the couple look more natural and canon

I think that this was a cute oneshot, it's even better yet that there are fan fics like these that make the co-stars the stars, just to cut myself short, I L-O-V-E IT!

I love you.
Seriously.
That...was amazing.

Nice work! About time Rabi apologized, LOL :P. There were a couple of things with grammar and typos that interrupted the read. LIke, "She does not know what else to do but comply to this funny exorcist boy with his strange ways of doing things which she barely comprehends" sounds like a run-on. Try reading things aloud to see if they're natural or not.

"It is a very realistic statement and it makes more sense to Miranda, and hits closer to home, than someone who would have told her that she is never the one as fault." This sentence compares the "realistic statement" to a "someone who would have told her" and the parallelism just doesn't hit home strongly enough. I think you should compare the statement to a statement, or a person to a person.

Other than that, I love the idea for this fic. If he doesn't apologize like this in the manga, we'll all be sore at him for it! LOL Keep it up!

This pairing is cute...Although i do like the Rinali(Linali)xAllen pairing better.

;_; Thank you for writing MirandaxRabi because I am a Miranda fan much like Kazeki is (who I know in the lj community XD)

This was great! Miranda for saying sorry and Rabi being guilty because of his actions.

D.Gray-Man...~come back. ;_;