Oh my god this is one of the most creative stories I have ever seen now what are you waiting for, write chapter 2!

Hey you can't just leave it there! Thats plain mean! I want MORE! And i don't care if I sound like a spoiled toddler its true! MORE MORE MORE! -Helpless Tone- Please?

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KEEP WRITING! YOU HAD BETTER KEEP ON WRITING! I LOVE IT!! MY SANITY DEPENDS ON IT!...can you tell? I think you've done a wonderful job with this and would be over the moon should you continue...

get back to me, let me know if you will...

Angel

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Interesting take on what was a horrible story. Sorry, I hated OofP more than anything. I really hope you continue on with this. I can just imagine all the different things you could do with a story line like this.

Yours in readership,
Chandra Tanith Devi.

Not quite sure what brought this on, but an interesting start:)