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| MollyTheWanderer 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThat's your firt attempt? Well concieved and executed. You kept everyone in character and I liked it so I'd say that means you did good. Thanks ^_^. |
| batfan7 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseNice little snippits of our hero's life. Short and sweet. |
| Amarin Rose 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAnd people wonder why Batman is always in such a dour mood. He deals with stuff like *this* night after night. :) |
| robster72 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseImpressive little story. I do like each little vignette you have included here. You have some nice half seen descriptions of the Batman as well. I hope you continue writing! |
| donk1999 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI am very impressed at the skill you showed on your first story. There are many authors with many stories that don't have half of the skill that you have showed here. I loved the all vignettes with the Justice League being my fav. The only place I see room for improvement is on the first paragraph on the first vignette. I thank it says Finger Street (Wink Wink) about fifty times. Keep up the good work. |