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Sandra
2007-08-27
ch 13, anon.
abuseLoved it. Loved it. Loved it. When I first read the summary and saw that this was an Esplin/Alloran fic I never thought that it would work, but you did it. I think I have a new Animorphs OTP! I hope you write some more fics for this pairing because this was truly brilliant.

Great job!
~Sandy
M&M
2007-08-01
ch 13, anon.
abuseI liked that scene in your last chapter where Alloran is teasing little Arbat with a weed. That was sad, but cute. Please update again! (NO I'm not trying to bug you. I was just re-reading this and decided that I might as well review it again because it's so awesome!)
Mel
2007-07-16
ch 13, anon.
abuseThanks for updating! I guess that's your story's way of saying 'Hey! I'm not through with you yet!' Anyway, I think the Andalite talking to Elfangor at the end of the Andalite Chronicles is Feyorn. They don't give the name at the end of the book; they just say 'Captain' but at the beginning of that book the StarSword's captain is Feyorn. Weird, I'd never gotten a review response before...I could barely concentrate on the last chapter you posted...is it finished now? (checks for 'complete' sign-no, didn't see one) Anyway, I love this. Excellent work! :)
Inthe-EyesofMarch
2007-07-10
ch 13,
abusehaha, yay for putting off chem!
Yeah, as soon as I finished one of my original stories, I started having ideas for short stories-- I love my characters just too much. T_T
One of the best Alloran fics that I've read, and longest standing ones, so of course it'll make my day. :) Keep updating.
Btw, Escafil was actually the name of one of Aldrea's friend's mother. Because I'm the biggest nerd ever.
Do one with Breeyar's point of view! I'm actually curious of how you would write that.
Keep updating!!
Inthe-EyesofMarch
2007-07-09
ch 12,
abuseI LOVE YOU!! YOU UPDATED!! I thought you were through-- this just made my day!!
*goes and reads*
Ember Nickel
2007-07-07
ch 13,
abuseOff the top of my head I think it's Captain Feyorn.
Mel
2007-07-03
ch 12, anon.
abuseThanks for updating this. I didn't see a 'completed' sign (hint, hint-but noy for you to put one, up, just for you to update again!) I love this story, please continue it.
voodooqueen126
2006-09-18
ch 11,
abusegah! i don't understand! no! it scares me!
traycon3
2006-09-17
ch 11, anon.
abuseTHIS LAST CHAPTER WAS SO SAD!
I have officially read all of your story in one day and wish I could have seen it earlier, so I wouldn't be lumping it all together, and forgetting half of what I had originally wanted so say. It was so good and funny and sad and...I'm running out of adjectives. Which is rather sad.
The last line of this chapter was very funny.
If you're going to write more, write more soon! It's too good to let it die with such a sad chapter!
Sinister Shadow
2006-09-17
ch 11,
abuseOMG that was fricking SAD! :( Good job!

However, I hate to burst your bubble, but you do know that songfics are forbidden on this site right? :( Sorry. Stupid rule, I know. ::hates FFN::

I'm just telling you that because I DON'T want to see this fic get deleted.

I ABSOLUTELY ADORED the ending. LMFAO! :D

This was a great chapter, despite the STUPID RULE. Please update soon!
voodooqueen126
2006-09-12
ch 10,
abuseit's cool that we both agree that the Australia trip occured in April, thanks for the timeline this will be useful in writing my own fic.
it's a good chapter.
Stacey
2006-09-11
ch 10, anon.
abuseThis is an excellent story. Hope to see more soon! :) :)
Ember Nickel
2006-09-11
ch 10,
abuseVery cool format.
Sinister Shadow
2006-09-11
ch 10, anon.
abuseThanks! :) And aw, that's sad. They're DRIFTING APART! WHY? Okay, so I get why, but it's still unfair.

Congrats on another excellent chapter. :)

Sinister

PS - Thanks for your review. It does make sense, doesn't it? :D Go MsTria!
Sinister Shadow
2006-09-01
ch 9, anon.
abuseOATMEAL COOKIES!

Dagnabbit, Ember beat me! :P

Anyhoot, AWESOME chapter Michy! I especially liked the "Cassie is a human Seerow" part. Makes a lot of sense. I also really liked Jake's take on the whole thing.

Thanks for updating, and great job as usual!

Sinister

P.S. - Chapter 11 of Visser Three's Journal is a tribute chapter to you and this fic. Just thought you might like to take a look. :D
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