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Stormkpr
2008-06-06
ch 9,
abuseStill an awesome fic. I love the pace and the action/excitement combined with the heart.
Stormkpr
2008-05-24
ch 7,
abuseGreat confrontation between Scott and Xavier! I like your take on the Phoenix saga...even if it takes me forever to read and review. :)
Stormkpr
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseI love how descriptive your writing is. I also enjoyed Rachel's role in this. Another good chapter.
Stormkpr
2008-05-03
ch 5,
abuseWow! Love the action and excitement of this. The ceremony is creepy. Great revision of the Phoenix. We need Logan to the rescue now! Fascinating story.
Stormkpr
2008-04-17
ch 3,
abuseExcellent third chapter. I like how both the plot as well as the relationships are building.
Stormkpr
2008-04-16
ch 2,
abuseThis is off to a great start. I love the way you write Jean/Scott. You have relationships down well. I enjoy fics that combine a plot with a look at relationships, so I am eager to see where this goes.
christy
2007-10-28
ch 12, anon.
abuseyeah,this story really proved justice to the whole-phoenix thing when it comes to the x-men:evolution show. All in all,or in other words... GREAT JOB! ;D
Yesyesyes
2007-02-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseYes! Yes! Yes! Finally, after all these yeyars!
swordbunny4486
2006-11-22
ch 12,
abusevery good
Ad1616
2006-11-11
ch 12, anon.
abuseOMG THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. YOU ARE AMAZING. I LOVE YOU. YOUR MY IDOL. I LOVE YOU STORY. ITS MY FAVORITE EVER.
requim17
2006-07-08
ch 12,
abuseaw. i always luv ur stories. i think u handled the pheonix great.. but then again i havent really read the real thing so i have nuthing to compare it too. but u really covered the most important things in life.. and i think that it's an awsum moral..

so i can't wait till ur next fic since i luv them all and they'r completely amazing. not to mention that u amaze me w/ how fast u update. hhaa.
band20
2006-07-06
ch 10,
abuseThis was a very interesting chapter, and I have to admit it was great seeing Selene and Shaw get what was coming to them. Granted having the Phoenix rebel against them was so easy and then they just got wiped out, it felt almost too easy. I got to admit that final part though was a nice touch. Having everyone reach out to her and express their feelings towards Jean, it was an interesting way to calm down the raging side of the Phoenix. It seems that Rachel though has been the real key to this whole thing, I think that little girl has more power than most people realize at such a young age. I'll review the next one soon, until then take it easy.
band20
2006-07-06
ch 9,
abuseMan this chapter brought back so many memories of the old animated series. The scene with Jean going back to her old house, thats practically right on with it. I got to admit I enjoyed that scene because it showed a lot of growth on the part of Jean. It was also nice seeing all of the X-men trying to help her snap out of the control that the Pheonix seemed to have had over her. It was a nice battle scene though, I enjoyed reading about the fastball special. I got to admit having Rachel there and trying to stop her mom was a nice touch. I'll review the other chapters here soon,just a matter of my internet connection staying on. Take it easy.
extra-ter2estrial
2006-06-25
ch 12,
abuseThis is truely your best work yet. I loved every bit of it, and enjoyed reading it tremendously. :)
KSimonT-X
2006-06-25
ch 3,
abuseIt's a nice way to start the morning with reading some of your work. It can realy wake a person up.

I This chapter is was just full of great scenes. Everyone seems to have grown and changed over the years, and for the better I might add. This is your first fic I remember seeing Amanda Sefton in with powers. I don't remember you doing that before, ut more power to you for adding it. Being engaged to kurt would undoubtedly make them both happy.

So Rachel sees mutant powers as "magic tricks." No surprise there. She's only so young that she can't fully grasp it yet. She seems eager to get her own!

I sense trouble brewing. If the Hellfire club is involved, you know bad stuff is coming. I have a feeling the X-Men are in for a brutal time!

Great story!
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