loved the story, would love to see more like this,maybe one where nabiki stays young with a ranma kasumi matchup.

You have an all-around cute little fic here, so thank you very much for sharing it. Keep that thought first and foremost in your mind. I tend to write criticism for the majority of my reviews (that's what reviews are mainly meant for, in my opinion).

The fic was fairly solid, but did have several plot holes here and there. For instance, Happosai and Cologne find out about Nabiki Tendo being inside Nabiki Saotome fairly early on, and Happosai even goes out for something to help out Tendo-chan. However, they seem to forget about this not much later (within the next couple of days) and everything goes on as was previous to said scene.

I did think it was funny that Minako Aino was the one who didn't believe in magic...all things considered. Especially since she already had a talking cat hanging around her. ^^

Your grammar and spelling were more than adequate, but had a few hangups here and there. One of the most common was using the word parole instead of promise or word ("Ranma gave his parole that he would help Nabiki-chan with her homework").

The introduction of Kaji was a little short on notice. I imagine he's from some of your previous fics, but I started with this one and was scratching my head towards the beginning.

Hmm...what else to yell about...

I found this in somebodies favorites and have to admit that it was a great read and definitely deserves more reviews than it's received to date. Hopefully you'll garner more in the near future.

Thanks again for the wonderful fic! ^^

Talk about being unable to mix languages in fanfiction. First: it tends to make the story worse – putting random words from other languages that is (unless they are name-related and, obviously, approved by the “fandom”). Second, third, fourth and fifth: not only you seem to know about three words in Japanese, you apparently don’t fully understand their meaning and put them in all the wrong places, for... you’ve guessed… all the wrong reasons.

I’m not sure what were you hoping to gain from such an obvious display of ignorance (and stupidity – that’s for sure). If that was just for sake of showing it – you have succeeded.

Cease and desist.

nice story

Superb story.

I was really quite impressed with this story and the characterizations.

Wow, this was a very cute story and very skillfully written on top of that. The character felt very real and you could easily feel the emotions coming out of them as if they were your own. Nabiki was done masterfully the breaking down of her cold exterior to that of a child and building back up was done beautifully. Akane was generally done well I think her violent tendences and mistrust was a little more enhanced but it was much better then most people portray her.

The scope of the story was quite amazing and the psychological aspects of The characters (esspecially Nabiki and Akane) were great.

But all that asside it was a real joy to read, sure it was cutesy enough that I'm likely to get cavities but that's my own issue heh. I am not normally a sucker for pure shoujo fics like this but when it comes to your stories I make an exception. Perhaps I may contact you with an idea or two of my more flffy stories that you might be able to help me?

Keep up the amazing work
- Chris (aka Ryoga's Best friend)

/sniff-sniff/
wa!
SO nice!
I really like happy endings.. like this!
/sniff/ kinda nice story to read for X-mas )

Hm... maybe the ablity to become female could help Nabiki sneak Ranma in...

two words "Good Job"

Nuf said

Loved the whole story, great ending to :)

Well done. Thank you very much for this wonderful story.

It is a really great story! good job!

Seems kinda sad for it to all be over, though. Also, I am sure plenty must of occured in those 5 years. However, all in all, it is a pleasure to read, and I am sure I will reread it again and again.

Wow, just a fantastic last part, and enjoyed the way you had things work out for all concerned, and was also happy to see that Nabiki and Ranma got together for this episode, and that the family started to heal at the end.

A great story!

Nice work, well done, and great finish.