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| spotsunshine 2008-07-18 ch 20,  | abusetoo cute |
| lovinleyton320 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if there's any other word to use but heartbreaking. I really like the way you've told this in first person - and in the way that we don't even necessarily get a complete dialogue between the characters, but rather a running commentary of what Lucas is saying and doing from Peyton. I don't know if I'm explaining that correctly, but...hopefully you understand! I really can't wait to read more...I love finding well written fics like this! |
| Caitlyn Rose 2008-05-27 ch 21, | abuseJust read all 21 - they've been an amazing read. Seriously, congratualations on the success of all of them - just the fact that you've had the dedication to keep going with this for years astounds me. I really hope we have more soon - i must say,i do enjoy the fluffy ones best! Definitely adding to favourites :D |
| alwayslovingyou 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abuseYeah, go right ahead and break my heart, lol. No really, your writing is...wow. This one was heartbreaking, and I love, love, love it. This is them, I mean Lucas and Peyton, this is how they work... “And so you’re saying that we’ve lost our minds?” “I always do when I’m around you.” Makes me love them even more... ;) love&peace |
| jamyj30 2008-03-17 ch 21, | abusegreat update, cant wait for more |
| lovelytiff 2008-03-17 ch 21, | abuseso excited about this weeks episode... cant wait! update soon! :) |
| hero6 2008-03-17 ch 21, | abuseWow, seriously wow. |
| RaInBoW-Of-MuSiC 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseDude. Reading this made me want to watch the 100th episode MORE, like that's even POSSIBLE. I can't wait to see what happens(: Thanks for updating! Please continue to write! |
| luke-n-peyton 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseI loved this. Even though I'm not fond of Lindsey, this was a great way to get Lucas and Peyton back together, with Lindsey being the one with the strength. |
| LP Forever 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseGreat story. I liked how LP knew it was now their time and everything would be okay just from gazing at each other. |
| Avschick33 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseLoved it! This was great. Now I just hope that LP get together and stay together till the end! Update soon. |
| alwayslovingyou 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseBeautiful... |
| CarolineNotCarolyn 2008-03-16 ch 21, | abuseWonderful. Your author's note summed up so much--and really articulated my own feelings. You were able to show how much Luke and Peyton love each other, without making Lindsey pathetic or a bitch. You made her human and noble, making her end things on her own terms, rather than getting screwed around and pulled around by Lucas. The lines that you wrote were amazing. I really liked this installment, especially: "True love always did exist. It existed in the locked eyes and hidden anguish of two people who tried to move on but couldn’t. It existed in the man who wanted to marry another woman and in the girl who loved him so very much that she would let him. Luckily for them, the other woman knew better." I don't really like Lindsey, but you made the breakup scenario better for all three of them, and it the above lines are so perfect. Fabulous job--and let's hope that something like this happens on Tuesday! |
| Mels175 2008-03-09 ch 20, | abuseI love all of your one shots!! Plz update soon |
| Lostand1TreeHillfan 2008-03-08 ch 20, | abuseYAY! Thank you for all the LP fluff, and the ending...LOves it. Thanks so much for the onesthot. Its so good. Please post more, i cant wait! bye! :P |