Ch. 9 is very suspenceful! Plz update!! ^^

I love this story!! It's so romantic! Please update! I hope Raphael doesn't die! :(

That was quite nice. Your first two or three chapters were a bit choppy and had more than a few grammatical errors, but you definitely seemed to hit your stride by the end. Although I would have liked to have seen some elaboration of the idea, Cassandra being possessed and turning against a cured Raphael is one hell of a kick-ass plot twist that I doubt anyone's ever attempted before. Very cool.

One bit of constructive criticism: try not to include author's notes in the body of the story. It tends to be a little jarring and may distract your audience from the tale you're trying to tell.

Other than that, though, good stuff. I'm all for Raphael/Cassandra, and it seems like there's a depressing lack of fics featuring the couple here at FFN. Keep up the good work. :)

--Anysia

Oh!
I want more *O*!
COngratulations for this fic! So wonderful!
I'll be waiting for the grand finale! Dont stop,please. I love cassandra and Raphael *-*

Kisses

Aw, how sad, I start school tomorrow and know how you're feeling. Thanks for review my story by the way, I just updated like right now, LOL. Hope you review that and I'll continuing reviewing yours. Ciao, cya soon ... sorta ...

Heehee, yay ! You updated ! This chapter was pretty fun, but oh no ! What happened to Cassandra ! Hope you update soon ! I wanna know what happens ! ( P.S. By the way, I left you a little note and question on my finished PR story, hope you read it and answer back quickly ! ) Keep the chapter a comin' !

okay now im a big FAn! okay since you have a new one im hopeing you could update =Dokat pleasE?

I love it but Cassandra seems a tad helpless and her being my favorite character, I wish she was a bit more headstrong. Oh well, it's your interpretation not mine! Other than that minor detail, fantastic work! I've always thought Cass and Raphael would end up together ever since I played the SCII demo at Target. When she said: "You're definetly not my type." to him I was convinced she was in denial...

Hey, that was great ! Love this chapter and hope you update soon !

Hey ! I read your new chapter and it was pretty good, I just think its kinda short. Hope you update soon !

whoa, Talim is ... peppy ! But in a good way. Heehee. Ah, romance is in the air ! Hope you update soon, looking forward it ! Really !

Haha ! Thanks for updating ! Yay ! And you don't have to PM me anymore, you're on my favorite authors and Author Alert List ! WOOHOO ! Talim and Yunsung ! YAY ! Love the slight comedy in this too ! Update soon ! Heehee !

Yay ! You updated ! Your story is following a great path so far, hope ya update soon ! And everyone's banning together ! Cool ! Is Talim gonna join ? Come on, you know she's my favorite character. Well, I'll just have to read on to find out huh. Wonderful Job ! Ciao for now !

hm, i see the beginning of an epic romance fanfic comin on. yet it was kinda short for a chapter but its ur fanfic not mine so do watcha gotta do. i do admire ur story makin skills, i dont have such an imagination. well anyways its still a good start for a story, keep it up

I can tell you seem to have a clear idea in mind for your story.

You need to work on improving your writing, however. Show us, don't tell us. I might be able to help with this if you need it. Just message me.

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Fiona