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| Vampire-Orchid 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseWay too cute and funny at the same time. Haha she fell asleep cute, if that ever happened to me, I would have to shoot myself lol |
| mystery.kay'est 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abusewow what a great story i loved it ^_^ nice work |
| sistergrim 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abusevery good, light & to the point... I'd forgotten how awesome that game's romance was. Wish they'd make another & reunite the two of them. |
| Selena Mars 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good. I mean you keep surprising me with how good your work is. I wish I could be as good as you when I write. I don't know, your writing has a loving feel that when I go to read it, it makes me feel better about love and life...I wish had that same ability. Keep up the good work! |
| Amme Moto 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! ^_^ |
| AngelofSnow 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWow I love this! It's so good. I really like how you wrote Alora. Especially the way you made her take out her regret in drink and pester Bastila. It's a great take on Revan in that she's light side, but never going to be perfect, ya know? You write drunkenness very well. Achieving the right balance between acute knowledge and stupidity. I love how Alora comes onto Carth. So sexy. And your Carth... well he's delicious. A really good job and a fun read. |
| starherokotor 2006-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! please write more! |
| Diskobox 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. You did a great job. It's absolutely adorable. |
| suki-megane 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abusehahaha! The last part is really funny and really sweet. I loved the whole story. A very good job! |
| Dranzen 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. And just for Alora's information, EVERYONE enjoys pushing Bastila's buttons. My favorite line: "For my drunkenness." Hee! ~Zen-chan |
| Hangman By Cent 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abusehaha i laughed out loud over this one. nice tidbit |