ah, poor alphinse, I doubt he can even comprehend just how very, very complicated this little group is.

simply amazing. you fused the two stories well. so we be expecting another chapter? I would very much hope so

MOAR PLEASE! your fanfiction is awesome! and i agree with you on the last chapter... ugh... please update again :D

Simply amazing as always <3

Update!

Oh! Mokona just burned Ed! Burned him bad!

This is wonderful and cookies for you updating.

Really, I just watched Brotherhood and read TRC manga. They have so much angst/hardships/sh*t going on that I realy can't say who I pity more in this story: Ed who wants the feather to bring his brother and their life back OR Shaoran who wants the feather to return it to Sakura (the original owner) and help her regain her memories and all of her soul back. Plus knowing already the background of each characters (canonically) adds all to the drama and tension this story builds. Lovely read, honestly, lovely.

YES NO LOVE TO TRC ENDING and I have mixed feelings with its epilogue though I'm pretty sure everything will be answered (or we can get a glimpse of the answer) in xHOLIC. >_>

Again, I love your story and keep it up.

I've been looking for a FMA fanfic. This seems like it could really be good.

YIKES!! I'm hooked. I can't WAIT for another chapter - I'm hoping you don't take so long in between posts like it seems you did from the author notes in all the previous chapters.
I rarely dig crossovers, but this is the best one I've read in ages, and seeing as it's two of my favorite anime series, I'm in :D
Your writing style is fluent and clear, and you get ideas and images across very nicely. I'm glad you're using the anime versions of both series, since I never could bring myself to read much of the FMA manga, and Tsubasa is, as you've pointed out, effing cryptic. I can't for the life of me understand what happened in the 'final battle' with Reed, and I have no love for the epilogue chapter, just like you. GAH.
Thank god for fanfiction, eh? :D
Can't wait - adding you to my story alerts.
Nini

Nice! update again!

TRC and FMA are a good combo! xD~You're actually very good. I felt their freakin tiredness. Wai, sugoi desu ne! Update and keep it up!

w w w . w r i t e r m g . w e b s . c o m

OMG! Please write more soon!

Such a great story! I really love this one and I'm glad your continuing it. Fantastic job and I hope to read more soon!

no love to the last Chapter of TRC but mucho to the epilogue...



The fight scene was great!! I'm tempted to doujinicise it, but I'm to lazy. It was so fuid... just like watching a very good retelling of an anime. I almost thought that this fic wa sover for a second, when Sakura was absorbing her feather... but Gluttony pulling it out? I didn't know that was possible... great to think of that...


See ya soon!
-SKF

All I can say is that I feel bad for Sakura. Having a part of the feather ripping out of your body must kill. Great chapter! It made my day.