Lol... So silly. What the heck?!

That was cute! That's the best word I can think of to describe it, sadly enough... *pouts*

I was really awed by it's sweet entrances to the plot. It was very short and decisive, but to the point. Nice!Nice!Nice!

I like his proof of loyalty...

Aw! :) Short and sweet!

To bad its not longer, but hey, I like it! That'd be so awesome if that happened in the anime. I would squeal with delight. ^_^.

if you went into detail of the whole thing, i'm sure it'd be better. the 3rd paragraph is good, the last just seems like it should be there just to tell you something, know what i mean? so try editing and put some words in to REALLY put this in humor