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| S. Phantom 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! That's the best word I can think of to describe it, sadly enough... *pouts* |
| inmanbulldog 2006-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI was really awed by it's sweet entrances to the plot. It was very short and decisive, but to the point. Nice!Nice!Nice! |
| Azamiko 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI like his proof of loyalty... |
| Prozacfairy 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! :) Short and sweet! |
| Frosty Pig 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseTo bad its not longer, but hey, I like it! That'd be so awesome if that happened in the anime. I would squeal with delight. ^_^. |
| wuz up 2006-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseif you went into detail of the whole thing, i'm sure it'd be better. the 3rd paragraph is good, the last just seems like it should be there just to tell you something, know what i mean? so try editing and put some words in to REALLY put this in humor |