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| Xilore 2008-04-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseI've been reading your story as it gets written and I really want to see Hinako and Ranma hook up! *evil grin* I also want to see Akane humiliated horribly and she know it. Keeping in the spirit of the Ranmaverse, I don't think the hooking up should be too simple or easy though. Nothing ever is for our poor Hero. |
| tatewaki2000 2008-01-13 ch 6,  | abuseA very very nice fic. aw. Great job. ^_^ please update soon. |
| keichan2 2007-11-18 ch 6, | abuseThanks for the new chapter! Please update soon! |
| Captain Deadpool 2007-11-14 ch 6, | abuseI'm glad you're no portraying Ranma as a immediately becomin' a straight A student. Studying, like the martial arts, requires alot of practice to get in form. |
| ranko lina Inverse 2007-11-14 ch 6, | abuseWonder what the old crone and gnome where doing there? Can't wait to see how Ranma and Hinako's relationship work out. |
| Wonderbee31 2007-11-14 ch 6, | abuseGood part, and can almost feel Kasumi's anguish that no matter what, Ranma cannot win Akane's trust it seems, as well as the Father's stuck in a-hole mode. Great to see how you had him take things up a notch, and looking forward to what happens next time. |
| JJK9 2007-11-14 ch 6, | abuseI liked this chapter, I just love it when Ranma gets payback on psychotic Akane. Please put in more of those, and maybe add Akane in a straight jacket. |
| Ookii Mamoru 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseInteresting concept, keep up the great work. OM |
| goku 2007-11-13 ch 6, anon. | abuse"Ranma’s face lit up in a smile, a little one that said ‘I’ve got a secret that I’m going to share with you… maybe’, and Hinako felt her cheek heat again. There was just so much raw energy in that grin, like the rogue of legend who seduced women with a smile. Giving herself a vigorous mental shake, she banished the line of thought that threatened to form, instead focusing on the deliberate motions of her friend. She clapped in deligh’s face lit up in a smile, a little one that said ‘I’ve got a secret that I’m going to share with you… maybe’, and Hinako felt her cheek heat again. There was just so much raw energy in that grin, like the rogue of legend who seduced women with a smile. Giving herself a vigorous mental shake, she banished the line of thought that threatened to form, instead focusing on the deliberate motions of her friend. She clapped in delight as he presented the homework with a flourish." you have a double print in here also i'd like to have seen ranma have gotten a decidedly bleeding cut in defense of his homework let hinako see ranma wasnt exagerateing when he said his life was dangerous |
| Ominae 2007-11-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseA good ending there, if I may say so myself. |
| RanmaChaos 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter!!Pleas econtinue to UPDATE!! |
| Bobboky 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abusegood |
| Hiryo 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseWow thanks for that wonderful chapter it continues quite nicely! Please update soon! |
| Rose1948 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuse::chuckles:: Whatever the trouble, I'm sure Ranma will rise above it. Eventually... Nice! |
| Dumbledork 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseHapposai probably asked Cologne to help him find a way to cure Hinako completely. Am I right? |