i liked it
great job

Wow. I even logged in just so i could review - that says something ^-^. You are extremely talented, obviously. Especially to have never seen an episode. Wow, just amazing job. You captured Kai very well. And Hiromi, too. To pick-up on such things without have even seeing the show...dang. and you got it perfect. Great job ^-^. Your style is amazing, by the way. lol. I feel inspired now. lol.
~Moonlight Serenity
aka Jess

omg!so luv it!n do u really want 2 no the moms in the manga?i can tell who's is gou's mom n who is makoa's mom but i am very dissapointed when i new who is kai's wife n who is ty's wife n good job on riting this fic!

hehe, awesome story! when i started writing fanfics on beyblade, i never really did watch dat show properly... i had to do research too... well it wasn't dat hard... never read the mangas either... well, i love your stories...

COOL!
Great store!

kiss*_*

You're a really good writer! I love the story by the way! ^-^ are you a Kai and Hilary fan? I am!! WE!!lol
Well, I hope you make more Beyblade fics! Particularly KaiHilary lol.

And thanks for the tip there. Gou meaning strength and Kai being a bussiness man...I've never read the manga before! lol I can't seem to find one from where I live...-sigh-

Nice! I lyk! Great story!
Keep writing!

Kitsune-chan *_*

I love you. Lol, when I saw the author's alert thingy I was all 'O.O'. Heehee. Niceness. Ooh! See! I KNEW it! Hilary was having Kai's babies! YES! XD I liked how ya talked about how his battle with Takao (ya notice how there's the CHARACTER Takao...then the creator, Aoki Takao? Weirdness I tell you) would never be in his favor (since, ya know...Tyson always wins in the end...) and the talk of the planets...(aw, sparkly scene, that was. Surprised I didn't get a seizure from all the darn flashes) was amazing! Sweet kisses...go get 'em, Kai. Lol. It was perfect and me loved it so much. Awesomeness!

What Fluff?

But in all honesty, this really was one amazingly well-written story, with technical description, and a lot of thought put into this. Congrats.

AG510