It's too cute. I love it. They're all very in character and you've expressed how Peter might feel after a long battle so well.

Fantastic story.

Loved it. It's beautiful. How they just remember the word and the feeling, but not who it was/is... Not really, at least!
Loved it
Luna

Terrific. I did always see Su rather as the mother. I adored Peter sneaking into their rooms saying good night too. You kept them all IC and I don't really know how to tell you how I enjoyed this, but it was great.

Wow i loved this too! keep writing one's like this
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Aw. That was so sweet!! I hope you write one about Edmund's nightmares or what Lucy dreams about when Susan or Peter checks up on them. Loved it!

I love this. it was so sweet. i liked the added bits of humor too. great job!

such a sweet story

aww this is very sweet and touching.
I sing my little brother to sleep every once in a while too.

That's really sweet! Great story!

"Everyone needs to be mothered once in awhile. Even Edmund does, although he pretends to be asleep every time I do it."

When I go into my brother's room to say goodnight to him, he always pretends to be asleep. This was a lovely fic... and you somehow managed to avoid fluff! :D

"Goodnight Mum, I love you too."

AW! So SWEET! Petah's bein' mo'thered!

aw...so sweet of Susan...just like a mother. =] great story!

aw... I still do that with my little sister when she's home from college despite the fact that she's 20 now. Still tuck her in and kiss her good night... I guess all siblings do it - much to the distress of the younger - no matter how old the younger gets... hehe

This is so sweet... And certainly not trite.

I admit that it had never occurred to me that while in Narnia that they might not remember their earthly parents--but then, as adults in Narnia, they also did not remember their past life until they returned to Spare Oom and came back through the wardrobe.

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Very sweet. Peter visiting Ed in his room and swearing to kill him was funny, even though we (and Peter) know the High King is too happy to be home to follow through on his threat.

And Susan "oh, get off being high and mighty for one night!" was terrific.

Nicely done!