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| limpet666 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is just amazing. Really well written. There are so few GOOD Mac/Danny fics out there... well, there are so few good CS:NY fanfics out there full stop. Most of them are so out of character it's practically impossible to read without cringing. But this was great, especially since you incorporated into an actual episode. Not to sound corny, but this ff was practically a dream-come-true because I actually got to this episode today, and the bit at the end with Mac and Danny really got my fangirl senses going. This is an instant fave, I look forward to reading more of your works ^^ |
| j. holly 2007-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice. Very thuroughly written. Mac felt a little OOC, but not overtly so. |
| Rebecca 2006-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuse...guh... you just made my night. this story is beautiful. |
| n. treasure 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was really good, and very well written. |
| The Swordsman 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the way that you had Danny and Mac get together at the end; it was sweet. The Swordsman |
| Damien'sOmen 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseO_O. Absolutely brilliant. |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it. There's really nothing else I can say. Loved the " If he meant that he was ready to move on and start afresh by picking up the pieces of a shattered Daniel Messer." line. And "He felt lips on his neck, tenderly kissing him into the breakdown he had been holding off the last few days." that's a great line too. Very well written, and better than I expected. |
| missiemeghan 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseYeah! A new story! I like it!! |
| Dybdahl 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuse*blinks in confusion* that was 43 pages? My attention span doesn't reach 43 pages. I usually manage 5 or 6 before I start doing something else. I must really like what you write. Shocking, really. Well maybe not that shocking. Have a piece of chocolate cake. |
| DuelMadnessSetoKaiba 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseawesome story. we need more like it. i really like how u made mac the one to stand up for danny. they r my favorite characters and they deserve to be together |
| Meine Welt 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseOh...my...god. o.o That was...AWESOME! My life is now complete. *dies/revives* ^^ Fabulous job! I actually saw this on the Mac/Danny LJ community before I got the author alert. XD Good job!! Looking forward for more from you! *skips off* |
| kamadi 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWell, those 43 pages were no trouble at all! (you know just a little hint for the next time...you may write longer stories because..damn your good). Thanks for posting the story! |
| Mickey Stone 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuse...*is speechless*...wow... This took me the better part of the morning to read, but it was more than worth it. This is a beautiful, well thought out and well written fic, and I love it to bits. The emotions were tangable, and I nearly cried in some places. This is...I can't even find a word to describe it because nothing I say will do it justice. x |