aw, they're so cute. It's amusing that the whole point of the story - starting over - doesn't actually get accomplished, or even mentioned, until the last bit of the story.

James and Lily are so cute. And you write them so well. Thank god you write HP stories...I think I would die if you didn't. Your work is just THAT amazing.

LOVIES AND...AH...ELLIPSES. HEHEHE...DID YOU SEE MAMA MIA? YOU GET IT? DOT DOT DOT? ELLIPSES? YEAH! *cracks up*


Bub'les

I love it...Love it, u are by far my favourite author. I could read ur stories over and over again just so i could get a good laugh. Wonderful.

Haha, that was cute. Loved it; it was great! :]

I absolutely love that fic! It's soo cute! My favorite part was where he said he was going to get fat! It made me laugh so hard!

xo Misstarlet

That was adorable, and quite funny, considering Harry got neither of their dancing skills. =) Anyway, I love the ending. It was so sweet.

I have a collection of oneshots, and I would like to use this. You get full credit.
Check out the story on my page, it's called "Lily and James through our eyes."

Oh, that was sweet. :)

Awesome. Your fics are always the funniest. I loved it. Those were my favourite lines (my favourite has to be 'particularly choclate gateau' :D):


“But why do we have to have a ball?” James asks the question as though he’s simply asking why the sky is blue. He pulls at his hair and repeatedly knocks it on one of the common room arm chairs. “A ball now, so out of the blue? MY PARENTS DID NOT PREPARE ME FOR THIS.”


“Cake could destroy us all if it wanted to,” Peter Pettigrew adds helpfully, with a faraway expression.

Sirius nods in agreement, “Particularly chocolate gateau.”

Remus says nothing, and silently wonders how ‘dark times’ links to the hypothesis of cake taking over the world, and comes to the conclusion that he is simply not zany enough to comprehend.


Sirius asks the simple question of, “What are you doing, Prongs?”

James answers, just as simply, “I’m going to become fat.”


“Excuse me Prongs, I have to go disturb Moony’s rather attractive date with accounts of our apparent sexual tension. Ta-ta.”


Great job! Hope you can update You Give Me Heart Palpitations soon.
- Gaby

Spiked pumpkin juice! Muahahaha...

cute ^_^

The constant need to vomit into shoes is so amusing. Loved that the dance was so awful. Great ficlet.

Hehe aww, that was cute AND funny at the same time! I love the whole shoe vomiting thing . . . fav quotes:

"“Cake could destroy us all if it wanted to,” Peter Pettigrew adds helpfully, with a faraway expression.

Sirius nods in agreement, “Particularly chocolate gateau.”

Remus says nothing, and silently wonders how ‘dark times’ links to the hypothesis of cake taking over the world, and comes to the conclusion that he is simply not zany enough to comprehend."

"“I’m sorry my swinging hips of excellence nearly killed you.”"

And . . .

"At once, he falls in love with her all over again, all the while hoping she does back (preferably soon, and preferably not under the influence of spiked pumpkin juice)."

I love it! It's sugary sweet but not lame, full but not overflowed with words, and, thank goodness, it has very good grammar.
I'd like to recommend it on an RPG site, the Final Prophecy. Could I? Pwetty pwease?
~Ileana

"swinging hips of excellence" HILARIOUS! Love the story!

Lovely

Lol. I loved it!