Very interesting - a Stargate Babylon5 crossover story as seen through the lens of David Weber. A reasonably plausible premise (given the precepts of the story) strongly written action sequences and interesting interpolations of the events make for a very fun read. Do watch the minor grammatical difficulties however, they can be quite distracting.

This story is crazy good i really like it and cant wait for the next few chapters. It needs more battle scenes though there has only been 1 major fight and u should have more i think. Then again it is your story but really good hurry with the next chapter plz

Great story, but a few technical nitpicks. You seem to lack the discrimination to distinguish between the words there they're and their. I recommend the purchase of a thesaurus.

besides everything that's going on in this story. i'm surprised you haven't had a team go out of rivendell to the mainland to study the ruins you mentioned. By god you write really good stories. well done. not just for this, but for the other stargate stories too. New Frontier, AD:Divergence, Gods Among Us, and Beyond The Farthest Star has been interesting. Normally i don't read Stargate stories unless they have a crossover that i recognize. but i gave this a chance and i'm glad i did. Your AU stargate stories. top notch.

~TankerMDK™

this story is god

a really cool story, please write more :)

O.O, this is bad. Wow that was an undedrstatement, this is really, hugely utterly bad. I hooe that they destroy the Sinhindrea those creatures so have it coming for them.

PLease don't make the Vorlons go crazy!

Awesome story, simply mind blowing! I'm anxiously waiting your next chapter. Hope you won't take as long.

Would it have not been a good idea for the animal to ask the nox about the radiation that is pleging her she ship and crew? Since they have experience dealing with the Sinhindrea and their weapons.

Thank you! You can't imagine how much I waited for a update.

About the political it was like/dislike kind of thing.Like because its very complex and in depth, dislike that politics is politics and some people are complete idiots and should be publicly executed, most are blowhard meatbags that just looking out for their own political **.

And something that caught my eye are some God references, like "Oh God..","may god help us" do they still believe in God(unlikely) and if yes, what God is it? actually its probably a cultural, societal and vocabulary influences that religion has over us and you added it without noticing or couldn't express yourself any other way.

Plus your Asgard seem a little OC feeling a lot more emotion and not being borderly incompetent. I like that but I don't see them jumping in a war without knowing anything about them just that they attacked a large fleet of warships that moved to their galaxy, for all they knew were an invasion force. Now hearing the nox testimony they would exterminate them with extreme prejudice.

I'm not complaining its really good and please continue and if something offended you in what I wrote here I apologize

Alright you finally updated. Although I'm disappointed it took place in the stargate universe. I'm much more interested to see what happens in the B5 galaxy, and I'm looking forward to the meeting of Levy and captain McKenzie

So, despite all their advancements, the Tauri still have their career politicians willing to ignore treaties and friends and stick their heads in the sand. Sigh, with all the talk about the Path and whatnot, I had thought they had grown beyond all that.

Nice chapter, I look forward to the next one!

A very powerful chapter. The tension was palatable during the meeting, which had its own twists like with the Nox. I suppose someone had to be in opposition, but I found that a surprise. Still such people do exist in the world, willing to push today's problems on tomorrow's generations. All of this and this fic has Reetou! I've wanted to read a story with them in it as allies for a long time. Thank you for a great chapter!

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

"By the time you joined the alliance, it had been so long that we had or less forgotten about this species and our encounter with them."
I think you meant to have the word "more" there, so that it read "more or less".