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| Kitty East 2007-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. That's pretty much all I can say. So use your imagination - pretend this a long, meaningful review! XD |
| midori.complex 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWhy would your instructor go after you with a sack of hammers? I really like this. No, really, I do. It tells a story, which is extremely hard to do with peotry (I think). Good job. |
| SweetStories11 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseahh.. very interesting and not bad at all! :D i know how hard it is to rhyme and make it have sense XD so great job!! i really enjoyed it! ^_^ -Monika- |
| Spleefmistress 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseLovely poem! (claps) |
| Azamiko 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseCool. |
| Junsui Chikyuu 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhyme scheme. It flows so nicely and it has that wonderful taste of the damned to it. Symbolism is nifty. Only thing is I couldn't find that rhyme you were talking about (found references, but no rhyme), will keep looking though, sounds interesting. Other than that, I liked this poem. It fits the episode nicely. |
| Half-elf 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHammers? Did he do that often? I liked it. So I guess that you got the feeling that his mother killed the grandfather too? |
| Irrel 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThe tiger knows with every slice It's for you that blood is spilling. |
| kayko15 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI can defiently see an Avatar thing in this. But I can't say I know for what character. Zuko: Same. Me: Though I like it. and most time I hate poetry. Zuko: Yeah. Anyway, Me: Great chapter/fic/oneshot. I can't wait to see more of your work. Later. K15 |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseHum. Well I must say, I wasn't to sure about reading it, since I tend to get tired of tribute type drabbles or poems, but it was short, so I figured I'd give it a try. Was suprised and please to find I rather liked it. The subtle implications and ryhme scheme were enjoyable. |
| Masako Moonshade 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry is chilling... Very beautiful. Ursa...I have to say she is now one of my favorite characters, among Iroh in rank. And you have done her purest justice. Thank you, my friend. |
| beanrox 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseRaw. Touching, but kinda gave me the spooks, ya know? Lurve it! |
| Hawkeye116 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseNice stuff. +fav |
| Beacon 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWow... intense... and powerful... and just a bit scary. Great job ^_~ |
| Vicki So 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseShwet. Love it. Lovely imagery and speculation about Ursa's motives for leaving. I like it! |