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Reviews for: Better Than Ice Cream
eektruffle
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
While I think the idea of sharing ice cream and using it within a sexual scene is totally fun, for me this snippet didn't work. I think you were writing in Lee's POV, if I'm not mistaken. I think with the original DLS, you have Kara's POV down pat, but not so much with Lee. Starting out with him feeling guilty and then mentally shouting "ME" just didn't seem like Lee. But perhaps that's just my view of Lee. I do love the way you have Kara reacting to Lee through the entire story. I'm sorry I couldn't like it more!
Hell-of-Fire
2006-11-23 . chapter 1
oh sweetness! thanks for writing his, enjoyed it a lot! :)
Silwyna
2006-06-25 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing :) I always loved vanilla, now I have one more reason to love it. ;)
annpo
2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Gotta love that Ice Cream!

A beautiful sequel to DLS.

Thanks nancy
Nytel
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
Beautiful, just beautiful. *grins*
stardust2002
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Wow, you DID decide to add more. How wonderful.

If it were me, it would have been chocolate, but then again, if I had Lee Adama, I wouldn't care WHAT flavour the ice cream was!

That was hot, and delicious. Gave me some ideas ... I'm sure my hubby will thank you for that!
KxH
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
is this going to be a story or a series of shorts? guess ill just find out!
TrinityKindred
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
More! More! More! More! Please, I am loving this series. Great Work!

*Crossing her Fingers*
TrinityKindred
Donna Lynn
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
I wonder if they have? During the "year later" theme when they got married to other people? I wonder if they did finally give in during that time period? Loved the ice cream bit and how you write, very talented.
scullymulder
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Ah, seriously...this is how the series should be -- wonderful job.
JAT.NJ
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
I don't think I'll ever look at vanilla ice cream the same way again.
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