 eektruffle 2007-04-30 . chapter 1While I think the idea of sharing ice cream and using it within a sexual scene is totally fun, for me this snippet didn't work. I think you were writing in Lee's POV, if I'm not mistaken. I think with the original DLS, you have Kara's POV down pat, but not so much with Lee. Starting out with him feeling guilty and then mentally shouting "ME" just didn't seem like Lee. But perhaps that's just my view of Lee. I do love the way you have Kara reacting to Lee through the entire story. I'm sorry I couldn't like it more! |
 Hell-of-Fire 2006-11-23 . chapter 1oh sweetness! thanks for writing his, enjoyed it a lot! :) |
 Silwyna 2006-06-25 . chapter 1This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing :) I always loved vanilla, now I have one more reason to love it. ;) |
 annpo 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Gotta love that Ice Cream!
A beautiful sequel to DLS.
Thanks nancy |
 Nytel 2006-05-15 . chapter 1Beautiful, just beautiful. *grins* |
 stardust2002 2006-05-14 . chapter 1Wow, you DID decide to add more. How wonderful.
If it were me, it would have been chocolate, but then again, if I had Lee Adama, I wouldn't care WHAT flavour the ice cream was!
That was hot, and delicious. Gave me some ideas ... I'm sure my hubby will thank you for that! |
 KxH 2006-05-14 . chapter 1is this going to be a story or a series of shorts? guess ill just find out! |
 TrinityKindred 2006-05-14 . chapter 1More! More! More! More! Please, I am loving this series. Great Work!
*Crossing her Fingers*
TrinityKindred |
 Donna Lynn 2006-05-14 . chapter 1I wonder if they have? During the "year later" theme when they got married to other people? I wonder if they did finally give in during that time period? Loved the ice cream bit and how you write, very talented. |
 scullymulder 2006-05-14 . chapter 1Ah, seriously...this is how the series should be -- wonderful job. |
 JAT.NJ 2006-05-14 . chapter 1I don't think I'll ever look at vanilla ice cream the same way again. |