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| kong is king. 2008-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseThat was ** gorgeous. I don't think I've ever read a yuri fic (not to mention a TemaHina fic) that drew me in like that. It was so fresh and alive... Kong is King |
| TemariFanForever 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseVery Nice Story, I Like How It Seemed Almost Believe-able. But, Temari's Dad Was Killed When She Was Very Young, Probably 7 Or 8. (Gaara Killed Him Around 3 Or 4, Because Their Father Was Trying To Kill Gaara) |
| Ray Venn Hakubi 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI think this might be one of the best things I've read on here. ^^ Very sweet... almost bittersweet, actually... you kind of get the feeling that when they're sober again, nothing will really have changed. It's got an air of hopelessness to it that's hard to do intentionally. |
| Konoko Busu 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseKyah :3 that was very, very cute! I really enjoyed it! |
| byakuganwalker 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusegood work, the tone was pleasing. also, you were able to make Temari drunk and speak intelligently as opposed to drunk and stupid, i like it. |
| elict 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseOh god YES a TemaxHina. And a GOOD one, adding to that. No wait, a superb one! You've made me really happy tonight. |
| BioDragon 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThat is so cute.:3 Are you going to continue? Please do it is so cute. |
| Billy Rose 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseaw Temari's very sweet when she wants to be kick ** fic ^_^ |
| johnnydepplover123 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abusethis is an...interesting story. i never pictured hinata and temari...well yeah...like this. but overall it's a good story. ~johnnydepplover123~ |
| Beetchy Bebeh 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, it's nice! It kinda soothed me back there XD Don't know why..lol. |
| Kokuei no Onchuu 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseVery elagent, in setting and style. Mwah, Gaara as a chain smoker... cute for some reason. I'm always a fan of Tem/Hina. Homosexual couples just work so much better then het in this series... Kishimoto should just stop denying it... |
| AmeKisame 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseOMG! It's so good, I love your details. The story was so cute. I love your writing style... |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseSquee. That was simply wonderful. And I've never seen that pairing done before, so it was new. |
| fen 2006-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseDAMN. you can write. I like it. It had good flow, and the imagry was amazing. keep it up. |
| Dark-kunoichi 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAck!! Okay, well Fanfiction ate my first review... and it was actually semi long. *sigh* So lets see if I can re-cap this. This is a very interesting pairing. Can't say I've read this one before. I loved the fact that even though they're both grown up, it still holds a child like intelligence to it. My mom told me once that if I wanted to know an answer about life to ask a child. "Their minds aren't corrupted yet." Or something along those lines. I still have no idea why this story made me think about that, but it did. Anyways I can't remember much else but that was the jist of it. Anyways great story. |