Reviews for Legacy of the Rasengan I: Naruto

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Naruto Namikaze 2008-07-22 ch 29, anon.	abuseYo! Naruto here, to correct a small spelling error. You called the 1st Gate "Keimon". The 1st Gate: Gate of Opening, is actually translated as "Kaimon". "Keimon" is one of the other gates; can't remember which. I have the English names memorized, but I only know a few of the Japanese ones. If I see the whole list, I'll send it to you in another review. Sayonara!
road kill609 2008-07-19 ch 6,	abuseanother thing, naruto failed 3 times before, meaning he would be three years older than his classmates
road kill609 2008-07-18 ch 5,	abuseif you take a moment to thik back to early in the naruto series, you will notice that the crystal ball causes lots of unanswered questions, such as, where did it go and why wasn't it used as the ultimate spying tool?
fanfic789 2008-07-15 ch 37,	abusei like your story and i hope the sequel is just as good
oreoxlove4ever 2008-07-14 ch 20,	abusei am incredibly mad at kakashi right now...more mad then i should be considering he doesn't exist >.< great chapter though!
Jaur 2008-07-12 ch 37,	abuseGreat story Thanks for writing it. Normaly I don't like reading stories that is to close to canon since they are usually quite boring, but you have actually sucsessfully written a story that almost exactly follows the originally plotline and still is interesting to read. It is impressive to see how you changed just enough to give the events different meanings even though they stay so similar. I'm looking forward to read the next story. keep up the good work.
Rock'in Socks 2008-06-29 ch 27,	abuseF* Sakura... I want to get my teammate to forgive me after I stole his most precious possessions so of course he will only be happy when I help his rival by spreading his secrets so that they (and their entire clan that wants to kill him) can become stronger based on his secret knowledge... cause it worked so well for kakashi. B*
LemonyCrosby 2008-06-29 ch 10,	abuseThank you for not letting Naruto share his secrets! I fa-rikin hate when he does that!
boredandwaiting 2008-06-22 ch 29,	abuseOkay just had to write a quick review. Congratulations I stayed up until five in the morning to read this far (I started at ten at night). Really, only like two maybe three stories have ever had me that hooked. But I've got a question on Naruto's dark charkra thing he used against Kabuto. Was that a bloodline or some effect of the seal? And will you explain it later? You've probably already answered this like a million and two times but I really want to know. I'll still keep reading and will probably find it soon I just wanted to write to say keep up the good work because you are one really great! author. -huggles-
Chewie Cookies 2008-06-20 ch 2,	abuseI likes this!
Erendhyl 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abuseSasuke was just fine; if you hadn't commented I wouldn't have known that you were at all unsure about how you portrayed him. I like that Naruto wasn't willing to prank Hinata. It would have been cruel of him to do that to her, especially because she's so nice. He is a LOT more talented than he was in the manga (even though it's not put towards entirely productive ends). However, I still don't think that he could have just thought up the basic idea for the Rasengan like that. It's just too advanced a jutsu for someone like a not-even-Genin Naruto to come up with out of the blue like that.
Erendhyl 2008-06-16 ch 3,	abuseThis sounds like it will turn out very interesting. I like the idea of Naruto acting like an idiot to make it seem as though he isn't very talented. I can't wait to see how powerful he actually is.
fan 2008-06-16 ch 38, anon.	abuseHey there, I was just in the neighbourhood, thought I'd pop by, leave a revie... OH SHI-
Naruhina for life 2008-06-14 ch 20,	abusek im not gonna lie, i would of seriously killed kakashi im not even joking i hate it wen people do like that it Me OFF! naruhina for life
Ishimaru Miwa 2008-06-13 ch 37,	abuseAww, damn. It's done. Almost finished it in one sitting, but my evil older brother refused to let me read just the one last chapter of this fic before it ended.. So I had to wait till now(10 hrs later) to read this last chappie and post this review. Good Job!! This fic kept me hooked and I just couldn't stop!! K, Im off to read the sequel now!! ^^

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