i love the way you write...very ballsy.

Still loving your style.

Can't say much more than that. Yes, it's a disturbing piece, but you don't present it as if what he's doing is OK and she should just snap out of it and love him. I really like that.

Love,

~Kitty

WOW, THAT WAS REALLY DEPRESSING BUT AT THE SAME TIME TI WAS AWSOME!

wow...le gasp. it was beautiful...i liked it. it was beautiful and sad and dirty and i get it...i so loved it...this is going in my favorites

Love it! I especially like the description of her relationship with Harry; I HATE Harry/anyone romances, and everything you wrote only proves my point. On to chapter two...

Never mind, I figured out who everyone is.
I had only read the first page when I posted the first review.

I reiterate everything I said in the first post at least 3 times over.

I love the way you write.
I love the way you write.
I love the way you write.

Oh, I love the way you write.

In terms of HP-elements, I'm still a little confused as to who is who, but just literature-wise, I don't think you need to know who the characters are for it to work entirely. For the piece to work entirely.

Oh! And...

I saw that you used the word "skitter" twice.

I liked the way that this was written, and the way that both Hermione and Draco's characters progressed throughout the story. The characters were well written and the focus was on the characters' themselves (somthing that I think in underplayed in a lot of fics).

That was so disturbing, it goes on my favorites.

Seriously, I've never liked the second person view... but hot damn. That was intense.

OMG. Arg. He makes me mad, how could he even say the name 'Tom' how dreadful I felt so bad for her.

Tabitha

you made me google Stockholm Syndrome.

good fic,btw.

Weird. But good.

I really do like this story, so much that I reviewed it the first time you posted it. Why the repost?