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Freehugs41 2008-07-08 ch 2,	abuseI liked the secound one better... but that is just me... Good Job!
jojochica 2008-02-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseGREAT STORY! !
LUVDAJCLUVIN 2007-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseI LOVED the original ending it made me feel better and made me not feel as bad for Jimmy. And everyone knows they like eachother more than friends so the original is the most logical one.WRITE MORE!
Lady Arabella Malfoy 2007-06-01 ch 2,	abuseTHat was quite a suspence you put me through with your fic. I understood right away that the first part was a dream, but i didn't really care, because eerything was written so vivdly, the motions the glances the words. THe first ending was quite a sock of course, but trully wonderful, i mean nobody has written a bad ending yet. It was really shaking out material. But the original ending was also good, even if it was so short. Keep up the good work.
Saiyuri007 2007-05-22 ch 2,	abuseI just finished reading all of your stories and I love them all please keep writing the stories you write make me and ohers feel happy!
Engraving Tunes Of Fancy 2006-10-23 ch 2,	abuseI think you should keep the ending that was not the original and write a sequal! Where Cindy reveals she loves him. Like comes and finds him after he left. Great writing! I like the good ending of the original but I like the idea of a rejection and then acceptence. In the second ending which is why I think you should keep it and write possibly a one shot sequal. You outdid yourself. Great job and writing.
PuNkPriNcEzZ017 2006-10-21 ch 2, anon.	abusevery well written! looking forward to a sequel!
Zergplex 2006-09-04 ch 2,	abuseActually I think it was very in character for Jimmy. The dream obviously affected Jimmy quite a bit, and I think this is how he would actually react with an 'outside stimuli' such as the dream hanging over his head. Admitting his feeling in that situation is only logical, and Jimmy is nothing if not logical. I personally perfer the second ending, I am a hopeless romantic so it evokes a response in me. The first is much better written though... why not rewrite the romantic ending to make it more up to the quality of the rest of the fiction? On the other hand the first ending could very easily lead into a third chapter exploring Cindy's feeling, her reasons for her choice, and give her a chance to make a confession of her own... Maybe talk to Nick (who obviously has seen this crush from a mile away. Somehow I think he would be understanding.) Just an idea.
BandGeeK24 2006-08-15 ch 2,	abusei really like the second ending better
dreadedreviewer 2006-08-13 ch 2,	abuseI have a tendency to write too much. So here is one word: beautiful
catsncritters 2006-07-31 ch 2,	abuseOh, this is spiffy. I'm in a Jimmy/Cindy kick lately, and I keep coming across your fan fiction. Yay!
The-Holy-Desciple-of-Muse 2006-07-26 ch 2,	abuseI LIKED HE ORIGINAL ENDING MORE, ALL THE WAY! it was just so cute, and i'm a total J/C shipper, :P. neways, grea story, both endings r good, i just like the original 1 more 'cuz i'm a happy ending girl, :D
Sk8er765 2006-07-07 ch 2,	abusegreat job! i like the first ending more... it's kinda more un-simple...
imfromjupiter 2006-06-13 ch 2,	abuseWell, normally I wouldn't be able to stand Cindy rejected Jimmy like that, but...I dunno, the original ending was a little bit TOO happy and mushy for me. Plus, the sad ending fit the story better and was good for me in that I've been reading to many happy fics lately. Either way, it was awesome and I praise your writing skills. ~Mayonnaisse
kttykatt07 2006-06-11 ch 2,	abuseI thought that this was very well written! You should definitely try a lighter story some time!

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