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Rickmer
2007-09-15 . chapter 1
Aw, cute.

I love it.
storylistener
2006-10-14 . chapter 1
This was a cute story. The Companion not knowing to go On Search until she saw her Chosen's eyes. The fact that the cat did it was what made it cute. Good Job!
Garbjin
2006-05-31 . chapter 1
Haha. Very nice Sena. I always knew there was a reason I came back to this site. You people are very entertaining to read, especially this story. Mouse is very clever character.
K'Treva-Kitty-Mura
2006-05-24 . chapter 1
Clever kitty.
Jaelle17
2006-05-19 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this!! Thank you!!

I want a Fawzi! :)
etcetera-cat
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
Hooray, it's a Sena-story!

This was really rather sweet and enjoyable to read, thank you!

~etcetera-cat
Myuu-Foxgirl
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
*snicker* That was cute! And amusing - I liked it!

You should try poking your non-working muses with a pointy stick until they decide to work just to make you stop annoying them. No guarantees that it'd work like I described.. but I would presume that by not working, your muses are annoying you.. which means you should annoy them, in return. (And, it'd be fun! Though.. you'd probably get bored after a while. Hm.)

Fawzi's cute.. I'm imagining her looking a lot like my old stuck up and lazier-than-Nara-Shikamaru cat.. whom we left behind when we moved.. oh well.

Would a Companion that was a combination of Mouse and etcetera-cat's Teva be scary? *brain takes that and runs like the wind* ..Oh my. *starts snickering* >:D

Off to ponder how scary a Mouse-Teva mix would be.. and how far around the bend that Companion's poor Chosen would be driven. xDD

~Myuu~
Misura
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
A very fun and light-hearted read, with just enough of a build-up to get the reader to get to know (and like) the characters, without getting too long - which is quite the feat in a one-shot, I'd say. Loved the perfectly feline way you wrote the cat, and the ending.
kierseth
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
aww! that's so cute.
Fireblade K'Chona
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
What can I say to this? Welcome back, Sena! -cough- Hopefully you can work on CTD as I've been sort of...not doing anything? -grins sheepishly-

Anyway, I quite enjoyed this little piece; I enjoyed it a lot, and was actually entertaining vague notions of Mouse Choosing Fawzi, but I'm kind of glad that's not the case, because, you know, Whites and whatnot...

wow, that was incoherent. Anyway, good to have you back, Sena, and I hope to see more of you around! ^_^
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