This story was very cute but didnt really follow the characteristics that we have to come to associate with boromir and faramir. It did relate to human emotion so it was well written. It could use some more details so the reader can better understand and relate even more.

Nice. You managed to write a sweet loving scene (the Steward's family probably had some of those) without forgetting the general tensions and issues the family also has. I loved the idea of making Boromir, Faramir, and Denethor eat all of the special cakes - and Boromir making himself sick was so funny.

How sweet! I'm not sure that men and boys are quite this bad, but I have to admit there is some truth to it, especially about the cakes!