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lovova
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Hello, this is Lovova, and I am informing you that I have added your Bleedman fic to my c2 archive, Fanfics On Bleedman's Work. If you'd like your story removed, please tell me and I will remove it immediately. Thank you for expanding the Bleedman Fanfiction world!
Daemon Chick
2007-10-10 . chapter 4
o. i like so far. want to read more ^_^
PLZ?!?
Bob-dude17
2007-07-28 . chapter 4
Where the heck have you been, you MUST get chapter 5 up! This is WAY better then what Griddles has going on!
fire blade quickclaw
2007-03-05 . chapter 4
Its good! but where is I? whimpers...
Yea yea yea Yo yo yo
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
Hello! Your story is awesome. Here's my OC.

Name: Katee
Age: 9
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Appearence: pink hair tied in pigtails, peach skin, and black eyes, wearing a black headband, a pink dress with 2 blue lines around it, black wristbands, blue and pink pantyhose and black dress shoes.
Likes: Zim, Gir, hanging out with friends, dark chocolate
Dislikes: the Grim Reaper
Ablilities: Super strength, shadow ball,
Friends: Zim, Gir, Gaz, Bell, Bubbles
Enemies: Samantha
Bio: She was adopted by a foster home when she was 2. She is a sweet girl who only cared about Irkens like Zim. Her powers came from a mysterious wishing star.

What do you think? Please put my OC in your story.
Gijinka Renamon
2007-01-10 . chapter 4
Yay! Update, and one we I get to show my stuff! ^_^ Please update soon!
By the way, I really like your Soulless descriptions. Maybe I'll try to draw them sometime...
darksoul123sp
2006-12-24 . chapter 4
Awesome I've been waiting for this.I also noted a few things:

1)Saji, Sam and the Underworld kid have sent a few soulless from the armada to destroy Megaville (Let the rule of Lord Rahk BEGIN!)

2)HER is called well...HER that's not her real name,It's just like HIM,the reason no one says his name is because it's too "evil" to say in a on a show rated TV-Y,that hasn't stoped me from finding his real name.Here is what I found:

A)The Devil
B)Lucifer
C)Satan
and D)His Infernal Majesty

Just like this their might be multiple names for HER.

and 3)Enemy Bio's (Excellent addition)

Also wanted to another part of Saji's profile since Chap 1.

Reasoning In Battle: When encounted with an enemy he'll study the situation as quickly as 5 seconds with this he'd know his area of battle,the items around him and most of all how to beat the enemy.

See ya next Review.
cooro crow and shadow sora94
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
From Dark Sora94,

Yay, Snafu-comic fics! I LOVE reading Snafu-comics fics! Keep up the good work!
B gal
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
I'll like this OC i made for this fic to be... in this fic:

name: Lori

age: the same age as Bell

spieces: human/demon

side: good(although she hangs out with Bell and Gir a lot.)

hair: brown with black and red streaks, steight, down to her hips./ flamey black hair with blood red tips

eyes: blue/blood red

skin: peach/pale-isk

outfit: a black skater t-shirt, blue toarned jeans and red sneaks./ a long black shadow dress, black gloves and high heels under neith the dress

personality: sweet yet a tough tom boy

weponds: a bunch of light savors, flame swords, paranormal devices and a high tech non man made gun./her demon powers

profile: Bell's best friend(other then Gir). The only one(other then Gir) that knows Bell's a slave to the counical. She, Bell and Gir'll meet the others later and team up with them. She's the only one that can free Bell from her inslavement. She like hanging out with them. she's half human because her mother was married to a demon. She used her demon form to fight the villians stronger then her.
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and mine 2 other OCs:

name: Deadly

speices: alien experiment

age:6

side: unknown(though likey both)

hair: white long down to her feet/tied to pigtales

eyes: black with blue pupiles/blue. can change blood red when working her power

skin: pink/peach

outfit: a light magenta dress that covered her feet with a blood stain on the conor of it/ a light pink dress with a red heart, long white socks and black dress shoes

extras: a light pink birthmark with a black gem on it on her forehead, no fingers and is really cute(though has fingers in her human disguise)

personality: a sweet yet neglected girl. when she's hypire she acts a lot like gir, only more random and less stupid. when she tries to kill someone, she acts s lot like chucky, or Johnny C.

weponds: her giant dagger knife(a wepond 10 times her size with a long black handle with a wide and grey blade with a jagged side and a blood stain on the top) and the oscaiual wepond that leaves blood spilling when victoms die

powers: to control the giant dagger knife, to control shadows when her eyes turned blood red.

profile: a young killer exipement created by Jumba. she used to kill everything that moves. now, she just kill anyone that ticks her off. she very dangerous, in fact she kills people that even the grim reaper doesn't know who kills them, sometimes not even when it's time for the grim reaper to reap their souls. she has a fangirl crush on Zim. she's quite visious. really hates Dib and tries to kill him.
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name: Doomsbury

age: nine

speices: human(?)

side: good(she thinks villiany is a waste of time)

hair: long, up to her hips, brown.

eyes: fire red

skin: peach

outfit: a black dress with a skull on it, two black chains with spikes on them on each of her wrists

personality: dark and mysterious

weponds: a black spell book with a blood red insingi on the centre of the cover.

profile: a young mysterious girl. has no emotions, so she usially has a board look on her face and talks in a board tone. The only one that has complete control over Deadly. is very smart, knows more then most people doesn't know. everyone(but Deadly) is scared of her, even Mandy. not much is know about her, not even where she came from.

you can used them, but you got to say I created them. k? good.
B gal
2006-12-22 . chapter 4
this is good so far. I like bleedman and his comics. this rox. CONTIUNE!
Hajime Morikawa
2006-12-21 . chapter 4
UPDATE! ^^ ^^ ^^

I wonder how does the kid w/robotic arm knows you (I mean the you in this story)?

Can't wait to see the REAL action, and um... happy holidays.
Rabukurafuto
2006-12-21 . chapter 4
This is good. You've gotten to the action!
Solartiger
2006-12-21 . chapter 4
I willin help Dex and the girls with my blaces
darksoul123sp
2006-10-29 . chapter 3
I CAN'T BELIVE IT! You updated THANK YOU!
Anway I was wondering a few things:
1)Will you update soon ? Please say VERY.
2)How do some of the Weapons look like ?

AND

3)When are the team of Saji and Sam,plus soulless, gonna meet the PPG's ?
Sam of shadowdale
2006-10-21 . chapter 3
Amazing plot twist with the villain, mate. Oh, I have a request. I was wondering if my character could be paired with Her later in the story. Just wondering.
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