Reviews for Dinotopia: Found

Moriko Hikari 2007-04-20 ch 3,	abuseHmm, sounds like trouble
Lady-Myrrh 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseyou cannot go hunting with a fully automatic weapon such as an M16,and as far as I know if a boy scout goes hunting it is on his own time and not with other scouts until the hunting merit badge becomes official.
Morvana Du'Miruvor 2006-05-20 ch 3,	abuseFirst, towards the end, I find that using "Christ" wouldn't go with the story. For some reason, I think that it would be inappropriate with the context of Dinotopia. Otherwise, it's pretty good.
Morvana Du'Miruvor 2006-05-20 ch 2,	abuseShould be longer. A bit Mary-Sue-ish. But actually pretty good. I feel bad--this is the first Dinotopia fic I've read. But you know...it's actually pretty good. It's better that it needs work. You're not getting a whole of criticism. It's actually pretty good, though. Congrats.
Morvana Du'Miruvor 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseHokay, you seem like an amateur, so I will be...nice. First, NEVER EVER EVER EVER acknowledge that a story is an Author-Inserted story. Avatars are sneered at in the FanFiction world. I would definitely get rid of that Author Note. PLEASE do it. Second, your prologue should be longer. It's not a prologue if it isn't longer, really. It's pointless. Otherwise, I like your writing style thus far. I haven't read enough to tell whether I'm really into it.