It's very hard to read with all the grammar errors.

It appears that this fic is nearly over. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read.

The final battle between Sean and Shuryou wasn't as action-packed as my battle scenes, but it was definitely deeper.

I look forward to your next chapter.

Deep...

An interesting depiction of Sean's internal conflict. I am wondering what you have in store for the next installment.

good work. Please continue.

*sniff* So sad. And cute, too.

I'm glad Sean remembers that now. And Serenade's here to help.

To quote Yugi from "Yu-Gi-Oh! The Abridged Series":

"This is a *ing bizzare episode."

Whoa. So...

That's how it happened. That's how they died...

Man, Sean's parents were AWESOME! But how were they related to Lan? His name was mentioned in that password...

Who sent that horrible monster? Worshippers of the Cybeasts, then? Well, at least it's dead now, right? For good...

Realy good job.

Nicely done. Am I safe to assume that the next couple of chapters will be about Sean seeing visions about each of the members of Gospel? We had Arashi here. There's still Speedy Dave, Princess Pride, and Gauss. Also Mr. Dark & ShadowMan and CutMan if you want to include them.

By the way, just a little note I should mention. "Brunette" is feminine. "Brunet" is masculine.

we need him to fulfill a destany. We must stop the darrknees with light for darrness does not commprehend the light. Sean must be Detirmened to show the light. Oh, and, i liked this chapter, goold work.

very good, keep writing

Nice use of Shuryou Gospel as a metaphorical personification of Sean's darker half.

this is great, keep it up.

Adding to my C2 Tormented Child.