ha ha nice concept. it has some grammar problems but the concept is great

Continue! continue! It's very good!

You are so mean. You start this story. Kill Michael. Give us a clue that he is still alive. And then you never continue.

I don't know if u r still bothering to write this story or not it's obviously been a long time since you wrote it, but i think u should make a second part.

the story is good so far but i have to say that it would be an insult to the creative mind if it is supposed to be finished. mysterious endings are good, but this one leaves a major question in the plot unanswered which defeats the point of story telling.

Isn't it Red Cell? In any case, cool story, nice happy ending! :)

Please read my works! Please? :)

When will the sequel be put on the net!

I will look forward to it!

Loved the storie! maybe an idea for an eppisode?

Karin