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| XxXFrostXxX 2007-06-18 ch 5,  | abuseGreat story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry but now I'm obbsessed with giving ppl ideas on stories. Sorry if you don't take ideas. Just tell me and I'll stop but I just though of one for this story. While Kakashi is fight the bloodline limit freak he starts to lose. Then Sasuke comes in and helps and uses the curse seal and turns all demonish. The dude is beaten but Sasuke is gravely wounded. And I'm lost after there. |
| Time and Fate 2007-03-28 ch 5, | abusehuh, your mastery of writing is impressive, by all means, please continue |
| THE GOD OF INTERESTING 2006-12-17 ch 5, | abuseinteresting |
| NocturneD 2006-12-16 ch 5, | abuse*waves sasuhina flag* |
| The Eromancer 2006-12-02 ch 4, | abusewait, didn' the Hokage have ninja watching?! |
| The Eromancer 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abusetrue domain of the ninja indead... |
| The Eromancer 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseHEY I like this fic! |
| Slip of the hand 2006-12-01 ch 4, | abuseCrap... that sucks |
| then nika said 2006-07-29 ch 4, | abuse? |
| yeah...that one kid... 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE! You have an interesting concept and I wish to read more than just three chapters of a good story. You've done a good job on a self-insert story(which is apparantly difficult, judging by the other half-** atempts that I have read at this site) and have incorperated an interiguing plot that holds prromise. I Know you wanted to finish up "Air and Darkness" and "Shinigami in the basement" while they were fresh in your system, but this story could be enjoyable for both parties, too. Hell, the faact that you had your character break Sasuke's nose was priceless and DEFINITELY made my day. I'll stop my post there and say bye. |
| Chixon 2006-05-23 ch 3, | abuseThe Hokage is a very wise man (at least from the current perspective). I just hope that you don't throw in a big twist and make Maikeru some evil spy. Nevermind, that would be cool. |
| then nika said 2006-05-21 ch 3, | abusecliff...hmm |
| rinoakes 2006-05-21 ch 2, | abuseokay at first i was confused why this was in the sasuhina section...but now that you've mentioned hyuuga in chap 2, i guess this might be placed correctly! anyway ch3 doesnt work for some strange reason [annoyingly, i think new chapters on are down right now:( so ill r-r later;) ] |
| then nika said 2006-05-18 ch 2, | abusehe doesn't know...how can he not know...yay hyuuga! |
| Ellie Tennis Girl 2006-05-17 ch 2, | abuseThis is getting interesting so please update soon please!^-^ Thank you and update soon please!^-^ |