:D Yay! Hehe. Poor Pip. Too bad he doesn't get his reward...

haha, intresting! keep up the good work X ^ D

Awesome!

interesting

i love it lol u should add on to it.

exciting intro.write more please.

I feel sorry for Pip! At the end, that is. I enjoyed it.

Well done! You should keep going with this, It's a great setting and plot.

lmfao! I love this!

This is awesome. Love the ending by the by. I actually like the characterization. I liked it very much.

Good story! =)

Aw. Adorable fic.

~ CrowRaven

YAY! It's cute and stuff. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

I love this story. Cute ending. Any chance for a sequel?

haha!
pipXseras is so much fun!
X3
I practically cried when they "killed" him.
Damn you khota hirano!
T_T
But...beggers can't be choosers i suppose.
Good one shot.
XD
I approve!
X#

=^_^=

-Tani