this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

hahahahaha! very good story overall but good ending in particular! hehehe. anyway i think i'll head over to ur page and check out the sequal! Ja ne!

Nice story I love it when will you write the next one .

I loked your story!

This was a wonderful story, I cannot wait for the sequal.
You did a wonderful job. Congradulations. Hope to be seeing a new story from you soon.

cute story

i love this story i hope that you update soon

last few chapter were great:)

i really like your story! please keep up the good work!

i really liked the story i have to wait to submit mine tho...its great u should really really continue ^^!

Your story is going quite well, I only have one concern, no disrespect ment, but how can two people share the same little voice, which leaves me questioning who's little voice is it really. I hope you plan to explain this in future chapters.
Please, Please, Please. (insert smilley face here).

like the last two chapters they were funny:)

this is so good i love shess/kag pairs please write more

interesting start