... hiroXkai... wat about reiXkai ne?? cute fic make me like it even without kaiXrei fluff :P

OMFG ok sorry abot but that was great and the werid thing is the girl named Erika is also my name too thats just freaky please update soon I love to read more of it please.

Huh? Hiro and Kai? Uh...
Anyway, not bad... but the end was kinda...you know...you know...
Well, BESIDES that...part...*cough* the story seems interesting. You sure are doing alot of typing and story writing, aren't you? Cool. That's great. Well, keep improving. You do seem to get better with descriptions. Keep on going! ^_^