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| OuroborosSnyder 2008-01-20 ch 1,  | abuseOh this was hot! Loved it! ~Snyder~ |
| Marish89 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, very sensual. I do hope you write a sequel or something similar. |
| vipercharmed 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseAs a girl I can totally say that it was HOT!. If I was her I would have needed swimming in the Artic Pole to calm down, HOT. |
| ladybrin 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseteehee- good story- thanks for writing this- |
| intheclosetromantic 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! Hot! And I read this in the middle of one of my classes... I was checking every two seconds to make sure no one was over my shoulder. Any way, really good. |
| Kath13 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Thanks for writing it |
| Rokimbo 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWell, I have to say that with this story you had absolutely NO PROBLEM with your descriptive writing! :-) Very Hot! I'd actually like to see you continue this fic - both with the case and more of the HOT B/A! ;-) |
| flightRN 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abusevery good, very hot. But unfortunately, Bobby would have been bounced out of a real nudie bar for touching the dancer during a lap dance (a real-life tip about stripper bars that my brother had to impart to me... whatever). |
| Leatah 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseOk, this is god,so hot...loved it...now you need to do a follow up story on this one...ya know maybe after they catch the bad guy...and then they can continue...more soon...please...Thanks |
| closefriend 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abusethat was indeed HOT. ; ) i loved it! just made my day so much brighter. awesome work, keep it up! |
| TriStateCopFan 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! that was smokin' hot ~ Poor Bobby...how could she leave him all worked up like that? LOL ...Very sexy, nice piece of writing that was thoroughly enjoyed... now I'm heading for MY cold shower! ;-) lol |
| Secret Phoenix 679 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHave no idea how to describe this...awesome doesnt come close! |
| Fluffy-CSI 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWHOA! *fans self* That was awesome! I don't know what you mean saying your English isn't good when it comes to this kind of stuff, because you managed to totally convery the hotness of this encounter without getting crude or cutesy. I would, of course, like to know what happens when they finish this case and go home...! |
| InfinityStar 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was...well...HOT! Your grammar and spelling were good...minor errors, but not enough to detract from total enjoyment of the story. Wow...I really loved this...you did a very good job! |
| rainy angellz 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseIt could happen... *anything* can happen. :) Great story! Oh gosh, so much sexual tension can really make people lose their objective, but no.. these two kept it under control to catch the suspect. xP |