Short and simple, yet haunting. Loved it. "It makes her wonder when Sasuke had become the man of her nightmares and when Naruto became bigger than the world itself." That sentence is amazing. And so is "He had died a traitor's death, took a hero with him, and left her behind to remember it." Damn Sasuke. LOL Dont ever give up writing!!

What an amazing pair of fics. You did Sakura's character justice while exploring what could be and it came out great.

I really liked this one. It was kind of subtle, and vague-ish, which I love. But it was also jammed packed full of angst, tragedy, and Kakashi/Sakura interaction. Overall, I just really, really love it.

"It makes her wonder when Sasuke had become the man of her nightmares and when Naruto became bigger than the world itself."
BASICALLY THE most beautiful line I've read in a while.

Sorry I had to comment on that when I was re reading chapter one.

CHAPTER 2! SO TRUE! LOVED IT! She is always being left behind and chances are this will be true in death. Odd how Kakashi is alive, he seems to be the same way Sakura is though, always the one left behind.

LOVED IT! SO MUCH!

Ahh, this one is really good too. I don't know why you only have 4 reviews?! I'm putting it in my favorites. ^_^ The mood is different from the first one but I think this one complements it well. It's also another one that gets under your skin with only a few simple words. Nothing big happened, but I think this is one of those fic that stays with you after you finish reading.

My favorite part is: He had died a traitor's death, took a hero with him, and left her behind to remember it. She wasn't worth taking, and she knows it better than anyone else.

Like the other line from the first part, I feel this one has a lot of meaning stacked on it too. Great job with this! I hope you'll do the long fic you're talking about, but please update CoD and PotW too, neh? ^_^

~Mika

Wow, this gave me the chills. I love how the words you used are simple and powerful at the same time. The imagery is so very haunting.

My favorite line is: It makes her wonder when Sasuke had become the man of her nightmares and when Naruto became bigger than the world itself.

There's so much meaning and possibilities in that sentence alone. Beautiful, Tea-san!

It makes her wonder when Sasuke had become the man of her nightmares and when Naruto became bigger than the world itself.

I absolutely loved that line. Beautifully written.

Wow...this is really powerful stuff! I love the way you write and the descriptions you used. It's really amazing and so sad. Just perfect heartwrenching angst! Great job! I hope something like this won't really happen in the manga though. Write more please!

I'm confushed.I really like this fic but I'm confushed.I do hope u continue this or explain this to me!!Nice job on your first angst fic.I hope u get more reviews then I did with my angst fic!

Oh I loved this fic. It really puts things into perspective. Thank you for a lovely fic.