That was really good. People should wright like that more often.

OHMYGOD! Thank you! what more can I say...

Wow!

no haniging around lol

without a doubt...one of the most enjoyable fan fiction stories I have ever read...sweet, impulsive, just as I picture these wonderful soulmates...A+...PLEASE consider a sequel!

wow..that was quick...hahah..i loved it...good one shot story..bye..bye...

Whoa baby! That was quick and beautiful and hot!

Whew! That was intense!

And I loved every word of it.

Would love to write more but I need to go take a cold shower now!

Wowe, get to the point already. Don't waste time with small talk. Direct and to the point. Very quickly. I was laughing and crying until she went to find Grissy. Chapter 1? More to come?

How could you not love this?

Truly delightful!

That was damn good. Damn good.

WOW...Just WOW! I 'm speechless... WOW!

Whew! *stops to catch breath*
That was...hot. I love your stuff!

wow--that was saucy!! lol! i'm going for a shower. sure, you made my hit list for fun writers. thanks!

I was highly entertained with this little story... Pierre was a joke.. and Becky.. *blink* I have no idea what Becky was.. but she disturbed me. I absolutely loved the 'smut lite'. :) I loved this.. and I can't wait until this Thursday! I wish I could join you guys in the chatroom.. but second shift yells my name.. heh. Great fic!

Lisa