He how lovely! Your writing style works really well with the speed and flow of the story, as well as the use of second persona POV. I enjoyed it a lot

why doesn't this have more reviews? I loved this one-shot so much. It was so sweet! Again, your characterizations are dead-on!! And the way you write Sora makes him seem even more adorable somehow. aw, really. I did enjoy this fic so much.

cute!

Aw. I loved this. X3

I was looking back at my old authors and authoresses list and saw you and figured 'Why not?' Glad I did, I came across this. X3

Anyway, it sucks how dead on writing you seem, but at least you didn't delete everything!

If you ever come back, I hope you know I loved this story.

Loved it!It sounded poetic.That was great.Keep up the great work.I hope you do another one like this.See'ya

still love your fanfiction. I'm glad I found you on ^_^

Cute!

Kawaii again...XD

This was gorgeous, every moment, every feeling evoked from the flow and the style. The last line feels like something heartbreaking and bittersweet and incredibly beautiful. I loved it.

interesting first chapter...i have to say though i dont think ive read a story with "you" in it so much. maybe you sould try using the name rather then "you" it makes it less confusing. but other then that the detail was good. good job. ^_^

that was so sweet! i luved it!