Really good character. A bit like the guy who first bound the hrule, just more showy. The only thing is, wasn't Mogget banned from using his dwarf form? Did he somehow convince Damiel to let him use it?

Easily one of my favorite's out of your short stories. Clean, concise, well-thought-out...a pleasure to read!

I think this one was good but not as good as your others. The fighting probably needed more detail. I liked " The young man considered upending his mug of tea onto his servant’s head, but decided against it. It would be a waste of tea, after all." very much. Mogget is so damn cool, all the time. Even when you make him suffer.

Azrael- What if Damiel was killed before he could train Terciel. His Aunt could then become the next Abhorsen and therefore train her nephew to follow in not only her footsteps but her fathers.

:D

wow. loved this. i keep repeating myself, but really, your characterizations and attention to detail are always so good, so what else can i say? an example: it makes sense that damiel wasn't that strong--the bloodlines *had* been greatly weakened, and how else would so many dead have been able to rise in the last half-century or so? :D

heartheartheart. you're going on favorite authors, if you're not there already.

Maybe they called him Yrael- no, probably not. Kaliel or whatever Sabriel's dad was named definitely had no idea that Mogget was the Eighth Bright Shiner.
I enjoyed Mogget's wisecracks. He always was my favorite character. And he always did hate melodrama.

Wow, yes, I'm stalking your fics! GASPETH! Hehe...

Yet another fantastic fic, though I kept imaginig Damiel to look like Obi-wan-kanobi from the fourth SW episode. It's just when you mentioned he was her grandfather, I imagine him to look quite old, but old old. Brown-white hair etc.

Lol, me and my rambling. And I love the attention you pay to detail, Mogget's name and mentioning Kerrigor. I know I;ve mentioned this before, but the whole 'Lord' Abhorsen thing again/ :P

-Lady- Your fan!

*gives big thumbs up* Go you!

Sabriel's grandfather can't have been the Abhorsen. The book says that Sabriel's father trained with HIS AUNT, not his dad.

I really like this story, & the way it ties in with Sabriel. I think that Damiel's character comes across brilliantly - wish I could write like that ^_^ love Charli xx

very nice:)
I like the characterization of mogget very much, and I love the way you've linked this in with 'Sabriel'.
Well done- this is great XD

yay! another abhorsen story from you! really, sometimes i think youre the only decent writer out there.

i really like this story; it has your trademark creativity, uniqueness, humour, and good writing. I wonder what happened between the one generation of Damiel and Sabriel. I like that I can still see some elements of Sabriel's personality within Damiel, but the differences between them two are also very large. I wonder what Sabriel's grandmother must be like, to have made such a difference within the generations... *hinthint*

*hopes to make you happy*

More garth nix, i'm happy indeed!
Yet again you got my laughing out loud! Really good work.
I'm not much of a write so I can't offer and crit.

Good job!