DUDE! what the blankied-blank man, u said you'd write some more now what happened?! this is really good and now i cant finish it because u stoped writing! u should finish it i meen its really really REALLY GOOD,MAN!
so if you are gonna "finish" id like to say for some future issues for the story to put in. see i love,LOVE me some Nick and i like to read when bad things happen to him so try and have Nick get most of the revenge put on him than Greg. that would be awesome!LOL well just think about it and if your not one of thoughs writers then foregive me for asking. anyway i gotta go...OH and just to let u know you are by far the ony person i wrote this much to.seriously.LOL ok PEACE im outta here!

Dang, hope it all works out. Can't wait to read the new version.

I like your story so far. im still interested! i hope u update soon.
*sorry to hear that bout your family& school*
-hope things get better 4 ya!

Please please please please PLEASE continue. -get's down on hands and knees- I beg of you. This is an awsome story, along with Revenge. I have both saved in my favorites folder. I was so glad to see that you updated Father of Mine today. I also have that one in my favoites.

please update soon, I like it

Take your time. School most important then computer. You will get back on it as soon as you finish School. When I'm in School, we never have computer back then. We got computer in 20. I graduate from School since 1992.

NO
GREG
I'LL SAVE YOU
OK KAYLA NEEDS TO TOUGHEN UP
I MEAN SHE'S GOT A GUN
SHE'S A COP HELLO
WELL PART COP
BUT THEY ALL HAVE A GUN

Need update. I will review fully when story is finished. More to come?

update soon!

OH! I cannot wait for more!

good chapter, hort but good, looking forward to the next one!

Interesting, keep up the good work. Hope they don't die!

hi when will we get the next chapter(s) as in plural>>Hint hint!! love the story

OOH! This is really good! I can't wait for more!

awsome keep it going