Nice... I like it. Not the best I've read in any category (ie plot, style, writing, grammar, etc.) but near the top in all (except grammar, that's in the middle). In other words: A very well-balanced fic. End score: 9.1/10.

Nice...

Wow, wasn't expecting Shinji to kill him. Rei, maybe, but not Shinji. My odds went something like:

Logani: 1:2
Asuka 1:4
Rei: 3:16
Shinji: 1:16.01
Toji, in an odd mishap involving a cave in and the positron rifle: 1:0.01

Have to say though, that was quite dramatic.

CRIMINALLY! OVERLOOKED!

Twenty reviews! Who on earth did you piss off for this one to be ignored like that? I'm guessing the carnage in the first few chapters would have turned a lot of readers away, though. Ah well, their loss. A very interesting spin on the whole EVA thing. What really gets me is that you wrote 20+ chapters in less than four months. Damn, wish I could write that fast! All in all, a good fic. Now I'm even more curious as to where your new one is going to lead. Later! T

Excellent double ending.

Cant really decide which i like more ... as im a S/R Fan
i didnt like her going away =P

But Shinji as Leader of NERV always intrigued me, so
i guess i like Ending 2 more ... sadly no1 is FAR
more likely regarding Shinjis personality (mustnt run away ...).

On the other hand it would be likely he got some flashes of
the future without him ... or a nice inner monologue ...
maybe hints from the Angels inside him =P

So no2 would be possible 2 .. and i like no2 more *g*
Dont we all like endless stories =P?

I never liked the Prequels with new children , as the
personalities were never so screwed / detailed as
the original.
But i always loved the Idea of Shinji behind THE DESK =P

So , all in all this story p/\wns imho. A few things
i wouldve done different .. but hell i didnt even write
anything for real yet ... but as i slowly turn insane ,
i maybe should start =)

I loved this story man god luck with your other stories and do please write a sequel it sounds quit interesting.

Loved the tree scowl part LOL

Well an excellent story; the two endings were also very well done and written. Though both fit very well for the fic. Good luck with future endeavors.

Whoa,
awesome chapter.
I still dislike mass battle scenes , but it was well done.

Almost only the Prelude to the Final Spectacle.
The small jokes were nice to lighten it up.

Terrific imho. Cant wait to see the aftermath =P

Please update soon I really like this story so keep up the good work.:)

You now have me hooked; update soon.

Haha,
i liked the dancing Eva =).

Also be warned, usually Battlescenes tend to get boring
when described too much.
NGE was always small scaled fights, fast paced and with
a twist sometimes (like retreat after almost defeat etc.).

Anyway , nice chapter this imho. Now if i can find that darn
song somewhere id be happy *lolz*.

Btw , only thing i missed was the fear / angst of the kids on
a 4 vs 14 fight ... maybe you can use the flight as interlude/
reflection time ?

Again a nice Chapter, but shinji saw the outside in the train not say =).
Also the dream sequence came as blackout, not sure if that
happened before. imho it would have been better implemented while shinji was still sittin on the stone. But as always , its
your story =P.Also the Dialogue wasnt done on the Stone yet.
Imho you maybe should just remove the Blackout and implement it as a simple "Flashback" Scene. But again , its only my opinion.
Nice flashbacks on Loganis part, fitted in imho.
Asuka was inchar *g*, shes developing some feelings and so
her hot temper gets stopped to abuse shinji for the 1st time evaar , lolz.
(Did i mention im a S/R fan ? So dont expect me to feel for
the red devil ^_~)
Im still not happy about Tabris, but the bond now between Logani
and Shinji is nice. Very intresting sympathy/hate relationship.
And i think i write way too extensive feedbacks *G*

Excellent Chapter imho ~_^

The confrontation between Shinji and Kaowru was very nicely done.
Normally i don't like the kids being too powerful (you know AT fields resurrecting fallen comrades etc.) but it fits in.

So much reviewing , maybe i should write a fanfic myself sometime *g*

I figured, even if I don't have time to proofread, I can at least keep up with the story. Good work, but you seem to keep replacing 'oh' with 'ow'.

Hehe,
nice turn. I think imho the soul as tiny light thing is a bit
clichee. True NGE style wouldve been the Trainwagon stuff interlude.. But its your Story ofc.

Cool was the 01 vs All scene ... although again anti climax when it was simply shredded to pieces. In most Fics 01
is too overpowered ... in your it was a lil .. erm ...
underpowered. Just my opinion you know.

The rest is well written and i like it a lot.
Tabris is kinda OOC, but as usual , its your Story , so
char OOCness is your freedom of writing right.

And as last time , i liked reading it ,so you have to do
somethin right =P