Reviews for Captive Butterfly

Reviews For: Captive Butterfly - Reviews: Page 1 of 38

Property Of Eriol 2008-10-04 ch 19,	abuseThat was the second time I'd read that story and it was just as amazing as the first. Hopefully I can read it again in a couple of months! Great work once again!!
xRstar28x 2008-08-31 ch 19,	abuseThat story was really amazing :) I especially liked the ending ... ur a reallii gd writer!
Moonlite Wolf 2008-08-02 ch 19,	abuse=P this was an incredibly great story! I really liked how everything turned out. Hope to see more of this great quality work!
satashiokami 2008-06-25 ch 19, anon.	abuseI loved this story! Would u plz make a squel plz?
Rayray 2008-06-10 ch 19, anon.	abuseThat was an AMAZING fanfic! But I was hoping that Meiling would kill Mother Fyuu. But you did a fantastic job and hope to read any more of fanfics you written!! Stay cool!! [=
Sparkly Faerie 2008-05-31 ch 19,	abuseI am inspired.- The way you set up the culture of the village was very clever. It really does give a sense of "that's just the way things are". So props to you on that. The story itself is beautiful; it really does display the desire for superiority, as well as the lingering nature of bitternes and anger -- you never really do forgive those that betray you. Although, I did feel that the ending chapters were a bit rushed. It's also rare to find a story like this that doesn't have sex in it; although, you should have at least mentioned it, since I didn't really expect that SxS had actually 'performed their duty', so to speak -- the pregnancy kind of took me by complete and utter surprise. But that's good, too. A lot of pregnancies are too totally predictable. I liked that this one wasn't. It just goes to show -- in every society, there will be a group of people who rebel. In this instance, it was shown wonderfully, and the rebellion succeeded. So, keep up the great work. ~ Sparkly Faerie
aiisha101 2008-05-29 ch 19,	abuseThis...This was just...WOW. just simply WOW. i can find no other worthy words to describe this 19 chaptered piece. i just hope that one day i will be able to even come up to your type of writing caliber. in short, i absolutely LOVE this. aiisha101
Alyss Ashworth 2008-05-24 ch 19,	abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! I stayed up until 2 am reading it, and it was SO worth it! This is probably one of the most interesting and well written AU Card Captor Sakura stories I have ever come across. It was romantic, dark, and it kept me wanting more with each chapter! Thank goodness I got to read it without having to wait for udates; I don't know what I would have done!
butterflyangellover14 2008-04-18 ch 19,	abusei just got done reading this story...AMAZING! i loved it! I mean, i didn't like that the men got beat and everything, but at least it ended happily (some-what at least)
insomniaaa 2008-04-14 ch 19,	abuseAww this was such a tragic and heart wrenching story! I enjoyed every moment of it. I read it all at once and I couldn't stop! The plot for this story is really intriguing (though very scary) and original. Every time I read the descriptions and pictured the grimy walls and dirty chains I got chills up my spine. So thanks for the read, it was a lovely and well written story! :D
BiskElle 2008-03-16 ch 19,	abuseWow... just wow. Brilliant epilogue, amazing epilogue! There are hundreds of other synonyms I could use to describe this epilogue but I don't want to bore you. The way you wrote it, with Sakura telling us the story -her story- made the words so much more personal, so much more moving, than any other way you could've used. Knowing what happened in each life of each character -characters that you have made us come to love- both the good as well as the bad, gave me a sense of closure, and satisfaction. Sakura and Syaoran's love shined through in this chapter, as clear as day and night. The butterfly -also mentioned in a beautiful way in the last chapter- symbolised the story's end. And this epilogue was certainly a fitting end, to such a wonderful story. Thank you for writing such a touching story. BiskElle XOXO
BiskElle 2008-03-16 ch 18,	abuseHey, do you remember me? I've been with this story -not from the very beginning- but from somewhere in middle of when this story was being written. So why am I only reviewing the last couple of chapters now, 7 months after its completion? Well, it isn't because I haven't wanted to... almost the opposite in fact. It's because I couldn't bare to have this story end, and so I kept putting off reading the last chapters. It sounds lame, I know. And then after awhile, I told myself that I would have to wait for the right moment to finish it. A story this good, deserved a fitting end. And yet... no moment seemed good enough. Tonight, I finally realized that there would be no perfect moment, and so reading it now, seemed as good as moment as ever. I re-read the whole story. 7 months made my memory a little hazy, after all. It made me laugh, and made me cry. At times, a huge smile would just break out on my face... usually during the moments between Sakura and Syaoran. By the time I reached this particular chapter, I was on the edge of my seat, forcing my eyes to slow down, wanting to prolong the anticipation, as best I could. Again, I cried. Not only in sadness for all those hurt, all those lost... but also in happiness. For those who deserved it, and recieved it in the end. BiskElle XOXO
patronsaintof 2008-03-15 ch 19,	abuseexcellent.
patronsaintof 2008-03-15 ch 6,	abuseI'm rather intrigued by the concept of this story. Only on chapter 6, but I'm hoping the rest is as intriguing. :]
k.tine 2008-03-13 ch 19,	abuse*tear OMG. i think i fell in love all over again LOL. no doubt, one of the best fics in a while! =)

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