This is fantastic! I love how you use that Latin motto, and show how Toph is the person in between the two figures described. Good job. Keep writing!

not realy but, I keep up

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very deep in thought

like it tons!

:)

I really like the emotion you gave off in your one-shoot

Yes, I can really imagine that Toph would want to have her own identidy, not as the Blind Bandit or as the delicate Bei Fong daughter, but as herself.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

wonderful.

I love it. Great job!

wow...that was EXCELLENT.

Awesome! This story fits Toph perfectly. It was well-written.

It makes...A lot of sense, actually. Two very diffrent sides of the same coin, though Toph wouldn't admit it for the world, ne?

this is so AWESOME!

Awesome. That's the only word I can think of to describe it.

Zuko: Ditto.

Me: I enjoyed it so much. Keep up the good work. Later. K15

Hm... very interesting...

I really, really like it. You really capture her glee for combat.

Only thing: the last sentence is somewhat awkward, especially repeating the phrase from the sentence before it.

Wonderful fic!:D I loved it! Toph is one of my favorite characters right now.

yes it does