Brilliant! Your word choice is excellent and I love how you keep the poem moving.

Wow. That was very good! I always loved Jekyll and Hyde...the poor dear (Jekyll of course), and the sexy sounding Hyde...

-Carol Anne :)

Mm...I'm always so captivated by the Jekyll and Hyde story! I love this poetic form! Such tragedy! And while I'm sympathetic to Dr. Jekyll...I am drawn to Hyde! ::soft purr:: Oh...if only they could have separated into two completely independent individuals. Each is determined to win the fight...and only one can occupy that struggling body at a time. I wonder, though, what kind of man Jekyll would have been without his inner Hyde?

It appears that Jekyll is in control at last, and peace within reach...but oh..Hyde just waits for his opportunity to manifest again. There will be no happiness for either man! Or life, either. Wonderfully angsty poem, Ms. Numbers! You have quite the talent! ::smiles::

Wo for this poem! It really boils the story down to it's essence, and it's really flowing. I really enjoyed reading it. And I really like the title. ;) You should write more poetry!

Hey, this is good! And sorry for not reviewing on SfaR, but stupid fanfiction *glares at fanfiction which is not actually stupid bit in reality quite wonderful* wouldn't let me. Maybe it will now? I'll go try.