Wonderful story! It's really hard to find a good Hunter X Hunter story that keeps all the characters in character. Thanks for keeping Senritsu in the picture. She's my favorite character!
It's a lttle hard to keep up with all the changes in time and setting, but it seems to be working. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Yay! You updated! I was curious about where this fic was going; I wasn't sure exactly what the plot was. But now with this chapter its been clarified, and its a pretty good one.

So, any nen training for Leorio? Or is he just going to remain a moving target?

Hey, this sounds like its gonna be great! Hope to read more soon.

OhohOH that was good. I loved how Leorio just went about and figured everything out, completely despite Kurapika and the rest /not saying anything/.

You write a fabulous Leorio--his lines were brilliantly hilarious and fit at the same time /that is hard to do/.

Thank you so much for writing this! I've been having a rough week, and this chapter cheered me up immensely.

This is awesome! Will be avidly awaiting updates. ^^

I've read your YYH fics before but I must say that I'm loving you HxH fic even more ^o^ Hunter x Hunter fandom really needs more love from authors like you. This story definitely delivers. I totally adore Killua and Gon's friendship here (borderlining shounen-ai). Love that you put Senritsu as one of the main characters in it too. Will she regain her former appearance? Welp, I'll be looking forward to the update!

In regards to your author's bio note: Good for you. You know where your priorities lie, have fun on your vacation/travels.

In regard to the fic: I like this fic. It has a nice flow, and lacks spelling and grammar errors. I like your characterization of Senritsu, and the way that all of your characters interact. You also end your chapters neatly, without cliffhangers or sudden stops.

I do hope that your plot bunny is just hiding under the bed with its cousins, the dust bunnies. It would be a shame if it had tried to follow you and missed a plane somewhere. Though I do wonder if it might end up crossbreeding with the dust bunnies, and what might result from such an encounter. Dust bunnies that cause occasional writing fever instead of hay fever? Or plot bunnies that run away if they get too much attention? Hm . . .

This is really really good. It's hard to find good HxH fics so I truly hope you continue this. ^_^

Great story so far! I love everyone's characterisations, especially Senristu. ^^

AND WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!? argh!!

that is such a cool power. gon as wild child, morality = 0; that is just so unbelievably accurate! and killua as lightning strikes! i wonder how the other characters will appear as in those cards (like hisoka? or killua's little sister)!

update quickly!!

Sensitive nen specialist, if he could pick up on the main trio's link to Leorio without the man even being there. Aw, Kurapika's sweet to Senritsu--and I agree with Killua: cold sucks.

I'm not above begging. so please, PLEASE, PLEASE continue this! there's so much i love about this story i can't even begin if i ever want to end. everything about them is so real, their personalities intact, or even enhanced by your awesome writing.

But what I think is best is that you had me from sentence one. Very few authors can do that, and you did. Especially the neat and seamless juggling of flashback and action, of humour and seriousness. WOW.

and is the gon/killua i see? *drools*

'"Sharing" for the two teenagers tended to go more along the lines of "pull the keyboard right out from under the other's hands to argue a point". Kurapica hoped they'd never grow up' This is just LOVELY. I read and reread and rereread that bit, and my heart still melted like butter each time. I love you for this.

Continue this QUICKLY!!

*cheers* Awesome! So, Kurapika's officially a guy? I can never tell, the author never really confirms it in the manga.

Awesome fic! You better continue this! :D However, I didn't really get the part when Senritsu plays--is she playing music while Gon, Killua, and Kurapika fight, or is she just imagining them fighting? You characterized Gon and Killua perfectly though (I just love their friendship!). Although the part about the gloves was a bit random, I still liked it. Well, I have to say this is one of the best HunterXHunter fics I've read! *adds story to favorite stories list and author to favorite authors list* XD

-Killua Zoldyck