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| Jak0TheShadows 2008-06-20 ch 6,  | abuseBest Arrested Development fic indeed. Remember to make a new paragraph each time there's a new speaker. It can make the reading somewhat confusing. Otherwise excellent. |
| fyborg 2008-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis fic has a good premise, and I like the characterization of George Michael. However, "A Tricky Grey Area" needs some polishing. The large block of text and random capitalization (e.g. "Assured Michael 'But what about...") makes it difficult to read. |
| Kimberly 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME. |
| litegrrl 2007-07-09 ch 6, anon. | abusemore! |
| Surely 2007-07-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, i really enjoyed this! you kept up with the bluth details. espeically the whole 'imagine the impact when the news came on the moment we turned on the tv?!" love the business with buster, gm and maeby (very good!). please try to develop tobias and barry a bit more. they're great, but do not rely on the tried and true innuendo so much, as great as it can be. Thank you for fulfilling my fantasy of michael getting arrested. too bad he wasn't in jail for longer, mnuch hilarity could have ensued, but i like the way he was bailed out, and the detail you give to characters: butterscotch and coffee, citrus and lemon, michael's beer, lucille's sunglasses. i am having a love affair with this fic. can't wait to read more. thanks so much! |
| Chary Moota 2007-07-03 ch 6, | abuseReally good story! :D (Can you read/review mine >__>) |
| dc 2007-07-03 ch 6, anon. | abusemore. please.soon. |
| dee dee 2007-07-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseplease update. your story really has depth. |
| KC 2007-05-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseI could read some of this story every day. Now what's gonna happen next?? |
| Krumnut 2007-03-11 ch 5, | abusestory love. all for you. |
| Dagger 2007-02-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love it! Write more soon, please *puppy eyes* |
| fmakhtc1fan 2007-02-19 ch 5, | abuseo wonder what'll happen...WRITE SOON PLEASE! |
| Sparklegirl Sassy 2007-02-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh god... how screwed up! This is some of the funniest stuff with an actual plot that I've read. Heheh, they're gonna think Micheal's in love with his brother. Hope to read more soon! - Sparkle * |
| beehive 2007-02-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis story is hilarious! Really funny, you got the feel of the show down great. I hope you update soon. |
| Sparklegirl Sassy 2007-02-06 ch 4, anon. | abuse...Cool... |