OMG!! JADENS SMART! lolz awesome...

Nice fic! I like the detailed duels and the storyline! So, update!

Good work! Keep it up!

Sincerely,
AshK

lets see... Omnipotens Equus Existo... Lemme take a crack
omni = all/everything potens = Power
equus = horse
existo = life

so it would be like "revival of the almighty horse" am I right?

...WOW, who wouldn't kill for these cards huh? But sadly, once again, mirror force.

...That was scary. You really did make these cards alittle too powerful. In the back of my mind though, I was thinking "Mirror Force".

Awesome! I've only read the first two chapters and I'm hooked! Finally, I find a story about the dueling! Also, I noticed how you copied off the Fantastic Four. Cool, keep it up! Maybe we can have an internet-duel sometime! I also have no idea who some of the characters are. I don't get WB, so I haven't watched to even Aster yet.

Uh... whoa. *twitches and backs away from the scene* Cool stuff, as always.

Hey i love the "Maho Shoujo"s. 2 questions: Are they the female versions of the "Elemental Hero"s, and can i borrow them for a fanfic. Thanks man, and keep up the great writing, i cant wait until you update agin!

Chazz’s Ojama Trio smile and dance; Ojama Yellow sighs, “That Mahou Koji Mei is incredibly cute!” Ojama Green happily beams, “I think I’d like to date that Mahou Koji Makoto, she’s got plenty of meat up there in the chest area.” Ojama Black falls to his knees, “Baby, I love that Mahou Koji Jeanne!” Chazz says to them, “The 3 of you can have them, I’d like Alexis for myself.”

Holy ** that's funny. This ** keeps crackin me up. This is a very good chapter. Dramatic, only one card that was to powerful...there was none. Maybe the Tru Freindship but just a little bit. Like it can't be played if u have a monster on your side of the field. That would make it perfect

There are just somethings I would like to say

Of course, in Chazz’s imagination… he sees himself as the Pharaoh and… in the court… a dancing Alexis in sexy Egyptian dancer clothes. Back in reality, he gone drooling over that situation… Alexis’ voice was heard, “Excuse me, Chazz?” Chazz snapped out of his daze, “Yes, Alexis?” She answered, “Your new title is the Green Forest Duelist, not the Blue Ocean Duelist; so close that mouth of yours.” Chazz blushed in embarrassment, “I’m so sorry!”

This ** gets me everytime

“I also equip him with United We Stand (spell card/equip) to increase everybody’s attack and defense by 800 points per monster on the field.” (Abidos the Third; ATK: 19450/DEF: 18950) (Pharaoh’s Servant; ATK: ATK: 16850/DEF: 15950) (Pharaonic Protector; ATK: 16850/DEF: 15950) (Pharaonic Priest; ATK: 16850/DEF: 15950) (Pharaoh’s Mistress; ATK: 16850/DEF: 15950)

This is just ** insane...and a little overborad

Syrus blushed like a cherry, “Dark Magician Girl, you’ve become much more beautiful than before.” Zane scoffs, “And you went steady with her? Heh!” Kenzan drools, “Whoa! You can totally see from her bare shoulder blades straight down to her——“ Bastion interrupted him, “Hey! She’s a duel monster, not a prostitute!” Then he was the next to notice what Kenzan was talking about, he practically drooled too, “Whoa! You’re right!” Another boy nearby them wrestled past Bastion, “Move over, dude!”

*Drooling*

Elaine smiles with victory, “Psyched!” Everyone got up in confusion, “Huh?” Rubia opens her clapped hands to reveal the Beautiful Magician of Love and Hope, Mana, brimming with impossible power. (Mana —Beautiful Magician of Love and Hope; ATK: 10)

Rediculas

Alright I just have to say a couple things. The cards are not as powerfull that's a good thing. However most of these duels end in like two turns, have like 12 cards in there hands, and have 1,110,0 attack points is overborad it makes the game no fun. Rubia and Mana are just to powerful like the 1st chapter.

Woah...That guy got ** slaped

Way more believeable then the first chapter. No cards that are to powerful, and I do still remember sailor moon, *hint* *hint* good text opposite elemental heros and jayden's sister? Kick **. Great chapter

Very Creative...I enjoy it alot. I've only got one problem these cards jayden got are perfect. They have no flaws making them like unfair. I mean everyone would be making Xeno decks like the field card...WAY TO POWERFULL. Good Job except that

Yay, you're back! Shame what happened to Hydra, though. Poor guy. :(

But, YAY for Jaden/Alexis!